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Pastro: Risen by Oko San In Progress
Every thousand years, a maiden must be selected to be sacrificed, to quench the inhumane demon; Lord Crnobog. On the alter that lays on Sacrifice Mountain, every so often; a hero will rise up to interfere.. Here the reader takes the perspective of Pastro, the first to start it all. Inspired by Legend Of Zelda & Fire Emblem: Awakening :) Enjoy. *Please note that this story is undergoing redo and change! Reviews, favorites, etc. are appreciated! As well as images.

Updated: April 19, 2015 | Published: March 27, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Chris Ramirez: Teenage Crazy by Kain Delo In Progress
Chris is the average Filipino teenager living the American Dream with her Aunt Shelley in their suburban home. So of course, everything is normal. Well, except for the fact that her Home Economics teacher is a little muy loco and her fake baby daddy is driving her crazy with his bankable, messed-up life. But hey, that's crazy teenagers for you. Right ?

Updated: February 19, 2017 | Published: May 23, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Experimental by Kain Delo Completed
The Yangtze Preparatory is home to many students of all kinds. It's also the home of lovebirds a plenty. (A collection of short stories with different sets of characters who go to the same school) --- Book is set as complete but will be updated with new stories whenever.

Updated: June 14, 2015 | Published: May 26, 2014 | Reviews: 1

Breakfast by Kain Delo Completed
She wants bed in breakfast for a reason but he doesn't need to know that.

Updated: June 14, 2015 | Published: October 23, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Fortune Cookie Monday by Kain Delo Completed
A note. That was all it took to change our fate. And all I had to do was eat at Wong's.

Updated: June 14, 2015 | Published: October 23, 2014 | Reviews: 1

Just As Hard by Kain Delo Completed
Fate is an asshole. The most unexpected things happen at the most unexpected times because of fate. Time is running out for Haylee and Mercer, Fate decided one day. And now they have to face graduation, college and growing up. Stupid, stupid fate.

Updated: November 18, 2014 | Published: November 9, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Stalk by Kain Delo Completed
Nothing added up. What was happening to Ken? Why would he do something like this to Lucy?

Updated: November 18, 2014 | Published: November 18, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Patricke by Kain Delo Completed
Paige is an absolute idiot in every page of the dictionary.

Updated: June 15, 2015 | Published: November 25, 2014 | Reviews: 0

The Windowsill by Kain Delo Completed
Two weeks after their fight, Blake finds her MIA boyfriend, who was supposed to be at Art Camp with Vanessa Keynes, outside her house with his guitar beside him and his pride was nowhere to be seen. Rated T for Swearing

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: February 19, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Muffin Strangers by Kain Delo Completed
She's been having a bad day and he's been spending too much time at the Cheese. On the day her admission letter came, they happened to meet over a cup of coffee and a chocolate muffin.

Updated: September 4, 2017 | Published: March 15, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Mark'd by Kain Delo Completed
Every time I think about what has happened in the recent months, I smile. Mark wasn't just a boy to me. He wasn't just the boy I met at camp. He was the boy I learned to love. He was the boy that taught me how to be human and how to love.

Updated: October 1, 2015 | Published: October 1, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Another Airport Love Story by Kain Delo Completed
Of all the cliché things you could write about, you choose to write about a boyfriend driving his girlfriend to the airport while she reminisces her memories of how their relationship came to be.

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: October 24, 2015 | Reviews: 1

The After by Kain Delo In Progress
This is what happens when you break her heart.

Updated: November 25, 2015 | Published: November 25, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Beyond the City by Kain Delo Completed
When a random boy walks up to you and offers you an origami rose, you take it and get over your ex.

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: February 27, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Public Display of Affection by Kain Delo Completed
I've always hated public display of affection between couples and yet I couldn't stop staring at my ex getting cozy with her new boyfriend.

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: April 1, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Her Fantasy by Kain Delo Completed
Luigi has been in love with Penny Rhett basically his entire life and he's about to tell her but her goddamn fantasy got in the way. It always did.

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: December 27, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Anxiety and Coffee by Kain Delo Completed
A coffee enthusiast waits anxiously for her coffee.

Updated: February 13, 2017 | Published: December 27, 2016 | Reviews: 1

Soggy French Fries by Kain Delo Completed
I sat near the window overlooking the docking bay with my soggy fries, hoping to catch a glimpse of his stupid undercut hairstyle that looked stupidly amazing on him. (A short sequel to Muffin Strangers)

Updated: February 17, 2017 | Published: February 13, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Musk by Kain Delo Completed
His perfume pulls me in. I'm mesmerized.

Updated: September 3, 2017 | Published: July 25, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Chocolate by Kain Delo Completed
(Sequel to Musk) Aria has just found out that she had a lot of schoolwork piled up along with her final exams but all she could think about was chocolate and how great it was so now it's up to the boyfriend to get her to work.

Updated: October 9, 2017 | Published: October 9, 2017 | Reviews: 0

'Eamersdr - Dreamers' - A collaboration with 'Mighty Pen' by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
The 'Eamersdr' were rare, individuals who could weave between parallel worlds, maintaining peace between both realms. It was not passed through bloodline nor ancestry, but by something far greater... A cataclysmic war wiped them out, and both dimensions lost contact with each other - until one finds himself in this precarious position, far from aware of the events which are about to take place... NaNoWriMo 2014 entry

Updated: July 24, 2020 | Published: October 28, 2014 | Reviews: 2

Copies of Copies - Archived by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
*This novel is archived, and will no longer be edited. Plot holes and unedited chapters remain* Imagine being trapped, being told that the outside world was so hostile and uninhabitable that the only place for you was the layer of glass resting above your head. Now imagine that inside this home, you were the subject of stares and whispers because of who you were, day in and day out. Now, imagine that you escaped, only to find something far worse...

Updated: June 23, 2018 | Published: April 11, 2016 | Reviews: 1

This is Why I'm Afraid by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
The future can change in the blink of an eye, and Percy knows about this more than most. A struggling student with crippling anxiety, he is plagued with conflicting ideas of how his life will turn out, and who he will love. It takes a new student, Hannah - and a looming threat - to help him realize that he can decide his own future, and he doesn't have to be afraid anymore. My first original work, re-written. LGBT.

Updated: September 30, 2020 | Published: September 3, 2018 | Reviews: 0

Rongholdst by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
The world of Archeon, divided by kingdoms and ruled by the Gods. Many different races live under the Banner Three, and when the world starts dying and the magic begins to fade, true intentions begin to dismantle oaths and promises. A king's son bears witness to these events, unwilling to carry out the destiny of the Gods yet unable to change it. A story set in a vitally important era of the world's history, discover the quiet unrest which quickly turns to armed conflict, and the measures needed to silence it.

Updated: January 19, 2019 | Published: January 8, 2019 | Reviews: 0

I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
*Some chapters and phrases were corrupted when transitioning between first and second draft, will be fixed soon.* A story about growing up and growing old, four friends deal with everything life has to offer. When a sudden and unexpected loss rocks the group to their core, they are held together by a single promise. This novel will explore their lives as they leave the bubble of student life and into the cold and uncaring world around them, but no matter where they end up in the world, they will always have each other.

Updated: December 31, 2019 | Published: January 28, 2019 | Reviews: 1