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  1. The Princes and the Dragon
  2. Blood Trail
  3. The Life of Maximilian Denvers
  4. Luna's Child
  5. Above All Other Women
  6. The Watcher and the Bull
  7. The Kidnapping of Mira Von Perner
  8. The Girl and the Warehouse
  9. Gay, Like Happy
  10. I'm Not Alice!
Latest Club Discussion
01/31/17

David Goff

Newbie

Hi there! I have one story on this site, but I'm hoping you're willing to read it and give me feedback. It's entitled, "Wish Making For Idiots," and is a mock-guide book on the subject of wish-making. It's intended to be humorous, only 9 chapters long at this point in time. Hit me up!

New Books

02/23/17

Halo: New Era By: Thomas Boyle

When the UNSC was created, there was one ship that disappeared as soon as it was built. The UNSC Bark malfunctioned and crash landed on an unknown island near Antarctica. 2164 was when it disappeared and now in 2601, only one person from the ship comes back. Airman Basic Thomas Locke was his name.… Read More

02/22/17

The Widow By: Rory Howard

A woman can be many things; a wife, mother, lover... witch. Though the last is forbidden, and when one woman dared to be everything, she had everything taken from her. Beatrice has begun a journey to demand her vengeance by any means necessary. She knows what a woman can be. She was a wife, mother,… Read More

02/21/17

Arthur Gomes and the Big Move By: Elizabeth Larsen

12-year-old Arthur's dad had news: He was getting promoted! The trouble is that Arthur was going ask Crystal Gracia to be his new girlfriend. He found out they were moving to where Arthur's mom grew up; Rhode Island. Join him to have a fun adventure. Read More

02/21/17

Changes for Samantha By: Elizabeth Larsen

Samantha's only 15 and has a great boyfriend, Jordan. One day, she wasn't feeling well and she missed a period, she went to the doctor's who told her she was pregnant. She wanted to fix her mistake, but how would she do that? Find out later. Read More

02/20/17

Halo: Fireteam Halo By: Thomas Boyle

On December 1, 2563, a station known as UNSC Halo was built. It took the UNSC 7 years to fully complete it. A mobile planetoid station was built to house people and soldiers alike. But, the station also created a team that would later be known as the Elite Seven, and the name of this team is… Read More

02/18/17

Rebecca's Tough Choice By: Elizabeth Larsen

When Rebecca got a boyfriend, Samuel, she was happy. They did everything together. One day, she learned she was pregnant. She faced a tough choice. What option would she choose? Would her father support her decision whatever she chooses? Find out later! Read More

02/18/17

Buster Hardings: The Winter Vacation Journal in New Hampshire By: Elizabeth Larsen

This is the moment the kids had been waiting for: New Hampshire for Winter Break. While the Pearson girls were being mean, Buster and his friend, Lena, end up being their roommates. Can Buster live with them without stress? He's been trying to be nice to them. Would things get better by the time the… Read More

02/18/17

Buster Hardings: Happy Valentine's Day By: Elizabeth Larsen

Everything is about to happen to Buster: Lena would be moving to Dover before Valentine's Day, trying out a sport, and is about to meet his new twin siblings. Read More

Latest Comment
02/22/17

Serina Harcourt

For: Snowfall

Thanks for commenting! :) Haha, yeah she finally remembered :P The entire first paragraph should really just read like this; Serina is an idiot. This should have happened in the last chapter. Please try to forgive her, she's shockingly forgetful. Seriously, that's pretty much what I was thinking the entire time :P I started to edit the last chapter to add it in, but that would have required people to go back and reread a chapter they'd already read so in the end this is what I came up with to fix my mistake. I got to bring back future Ariana though, so I suppose some good came out of it. Bringing Rose back has been on my list of things I want to do for a really long time but I haven't been able to find a suitable spot to fit her in. She was going to be the one to visit Snow in the hospital, but it made more sense for Claire to do that instead, so Rose was replaced. Still, Rose is still out there giving advice and guiding. She'll reappear again at some point. She mainly appeared in this chapter just to remind people that I have not forgotten about the Fate/Destiny storyline either xD It's still there, it's just sort of in the background like it was for the majority of Warehouse. As for future Ariana, I'm just going to leave all of that up to your imagination for now. This isn't something I plan to address for a good while. In fact, at the moment I have no plans to bring future Ariana back for a third visit. That said, I've been developing plans for the future. I've always wanted to try my hand at writing fantasy and I'm using this as a way to slowly create a fantasy world without having to jump into it immediately. Fantasy isn't an area that I feel at all comfortable writing in, so I need to ease myself into it :P I have the Coven and their school that I can go and tell stories in some day, or I can do something with Sienna and Divinity, or Michael and the Dawnguard. It's all connected in a way, but they could all be separate stories able to be read without ever needing to read any of the others. A sort of anthology series or something. Future Ariana would certainly be part of that in some way. And on that note, I'm completely rambling and totally off topic :P

I've had that scene with Sophia in the back of my mind for years. Even when Sophia's Mike (I've got to stop naming new characters after old ones :P) died, I had a vague idea of this scene even though I had no idea what would bring it about. Actually, 'idea' is too strong of a word for what I had in mind at the time, but still :P In a way, this chapter is the payoff for something I've been planning for years. That's one reason why I specifically didn't mention Sophia's feelings on the matter at the time. I knew I wanted to do this scene (which for whatever reason always took place in a basement, although for the life of me I don't know why) so I held off for a while. This isn't something Sophia would have hit Snow with right after everything happened, so it was pushed back to now. I completely agree with you about Snow's feelings on being selfish. She's being really hard on herself. I'd say she's got the right to be a little selfish with everything she's dealing with. At this point though, she's begun to realize just how much she doesn't ever want to be like Sara and everything Steven told her back on Founder's Day has weighed on her ever since. She doesn't want Steven to be right, yet she's staring at proof that he was. That's really hard for her to deal with. She wants to be better than Sara was, but now she's convinced she's no better at all and that's really painful for her.

Clara is definitely reaching her breaking point, that's a certainty. All of them are, really. She's consumed by guilt over what she did to Jacob, and the relationship she's built with him (and her potential feelings for him) has only made things worse. She wants to tell him the truth, but after what happened the last time she crossed JTG, she's rightfully scared. JTG had her mother fired within a day just for blocking her number, so if she outright defies JTG's instructions not to tell Jacob the truth, then she's just asking for trouble. Then again, it's JTG we're talking about :P She makes up her own rules, so who knows? Maybe she'll throw a monkey wrench into the whole situation. Anything's possible. Anyway, I'm glad you liked this part of the chapter. I've been wanting to include Jacob much more than I have, but with so many characters all demanding attention he just doesn't get as much page time. Also, for a long time I wasn't really sure what I was going to do with him. He was a plot device for Clara's secret and nothing more. Now that I know how I'm going to use him, he should start to appear that much more. As for what might happen when they meet... well, things will happen. Let's just leave it at that :P   

Lol, no, no, they couldn't possibly have gotten access to all of Sara's secrets. It would have told them too much and where would the fun be in that? xD It was JTG, by the way, that fried the computer. It's not made explicitly clear in the chapter, but its not meant to be any kind of big secret. As for what's in the rest of the files, they'll be looking at those in the next chapter. That video kind of distracted them :P Anyway, with Miranda I'd say its less that she wanted to destroy him and more about the fact that she could if she wanted to. She's blackmailing him, basically, into giving her whatever she wants. She had his career, his marriage, and his reputation held in her hands. There wasn't much poor Tony could do. Heh, well you probably should be worried about Snow's plan. It's rash, no doubt, but they do have to do something. It may not work, but for the moment it's all they've got. I suppose that's really one of their biggest problems at the moment. They're convinced that Tony and Rachel are their only enemy, and based on the evidence they've collected I can't really blame them. Still, it's certainly possible that Tony and Rachel have someone or even a group of people helping them and if they do then all of their planning might be completely for naught. If they're wrong and Tony and Miranda aren't alone in all this, Snow and the gang could be in a lot more trouble than they realize. Rachel does have a job, by the way. I have no idea if I ever mentioned it before and right now I couldn't even tell you what job she's supposed to have, but she does indeed have one :P Allow that to affect your JTG theories however you wish xD

It was Emilia that Zoe fought, so no reason at all to feel like an idiot :P The only reason I didn't outright confirm it in the chapter is because Zoe has no idea who Emilia is and it would have seemed odd for her to announce herself so directly before doing battle :P Anyway, yes, it was her and she's not that shy, nervous girl anymore, is she? You'll find out pretty quickly what Zoe thinks about whether or not Emilia is dead, and maybe get a bit more information about... related stuff xD Anything else I say would drift into spoiler territory, I'm afraid. But yeah, some of the magical stuff is starting to filter in more and more. It's certainly an uncomfortable time for me because, well I have to write scenes like that battle from time to time. That was quite a challenge considering how short it was and I'm not at all sure of the quality of the fight, but it was my first non-scifi action sequence so I guess it'll do. But yes, stuff and things are coming. I still don't know how much will happen before the sequel comes around, though. With this chapter we've entered Snowfall's final act and I'm pretty focused on JTG leading up to the finale which is approaching faster than I expected, so the magic may take a bit of a backseat to the JTG mystery. If so, the Coven and especially Sienna wouldn't appear until the sequel, but I can say with certainty that if they do get pushed to the sequel, you can expect much more of the magical storyline right from the start and hopefully it'll be worth the wait. There will be a lot less secrets on that front to be sure and it'll take a much more upfront role than it has so far. That'll be great for me as well because I can finally stop holding back so many secrets :P

Latest Review
01/31/17

David Goff

For: The Colors of the Mind

Rating:
Delightful free-verse poem, with an interesting cycle through primary emotions; from passion to calmness, from depression to hope. Word choices are direct enough to get across the message, although the rhythm doesn't flow extremely neatly. Then again, neither does the mind. 4/5 stars.
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