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  1. The Princes and the Dragon
  2. Blood Trail
  3. The Life of Maximilian Denvers
  4. No Strings
  5. Luna's Child
  6. Above All Other Women
  7. The Watcher and the Bull
  8. The Kidnapping of Mira Von Perner
  9. The Girl and the Warehouse
  10. Gay, Like Happy
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04/03/17

C. M. Brighid Bachleda

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I'm working on a Fushigi Yuugi X-Over Fanfic Novel; have yet got any Comments and I just updated it...
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07/26/17

The Heart of a Starchild By: Singed, the Mad Chemist

Warwick, a savage creature born from perverse science and alchemy, uses his abilities to rid the streets of Zaun of the rampant crime that infests it, if only to curb his murderous instincts and to make up for the sins he made when he was still a man. Upon hunting down one such criminal to the… Read More

07/26/17

Changes By: Allyson Andrews

It is summertime and Mallory and Alex spend time alone. What are they going to talk about? Oneshot Family Ties fanfiction Read More

07/25/17

Musk By: Kain Delo

His perfume pulls me in. I'm mesmerized. Read More

07/17/17

Indiscretion By: Mireille Sillander

Off-the-clock shenanigans make their way to disrupt office hours Read More

07/16/17

Sir David Attenborough Explores By: Mireille Sillander

Sir David Attenborough treks across the globe in search of mythical creatures. Read More

07/14/17

The Human and Angle By: Millicent Dagworth

Humans has always fallen for angels, but an angel has never fallen for a human. Read More

07/14/17

Gaea: The Enchanted Journal of the Amazon Princess By: C. M. Brighid Bachleda

"It has been over a thousand years since the Amazons had colonized this once barren satellite and now it's a paradise fiercely protected by women. The Earth fell into a apocalyptic war in the year 2020 that lasted for seven years and on the seventh year in 2027; the Earth fell into chaos and history… Read More

07/11/17

Chasing Stars By: Sarah Relja

Captain Dreng Strelec and his crew are tough and rowdy smugglers who travel across galaxies. They never miss an opportunity to make money. Everything changes when they find Charlie a Human who has been trapped in a cryochamber for nearly a thousand years. Read More

Latest Comment
07/26/17

Serina Harcourt

For: Snowfall

Thanks for the comment :) Hehe, I imagine them falling was a bit anticlimactic at this point, huh? :P And also, I lied. This is the last chapter I’m going to use song lyrics for the title. Seriously, I’m done :P I just couldn’t resist with that one for obvious reasons. Also, I felt like I typed the word fall/fell about 6 million times in this chapter, so there’s that too. And who doesn't like that song, anyway? She's a good girl, loves her mama. Loves Jesus and America too. She's a good girl, crazy 'bout Elvis. Loves horses and her boyfriend too. Why am I sitting here typing out song lyrics? Yeah, I'm losing it. Anyway, I’m glad you thought the tension and whatnot was ok and that Snow managed to make a convincing JTG. I was not at all confident that Snow’s portrayal of JTG would be believable in the least. Given that she’s quite obviously lying and the reader knows it, I wasn’t sure how convincing she would be. But yeah, that’s one thing I knew I wanted to do for sure with Rachel not quite believing but also not quite dismissing Snow’s act. There were a number of reasons why, one of which was as you say it’s more interesting than the other way, but also neither of the other ways seemed all that believable. Snow didn't really have enough proof to outright convince her, but she's convincing enough to make Rachel unsure.  

Well, I’m glad you like Rachel although I have to say I didn’t make any attempt whatsoever to make her likable. It wasn’t even in the back of my mind to try to make her likable :P In fact, she was never supposed to survive the chapter to begin with. I’d always expected her to fall to her death much like Miranda had, it was supposed to be poetic or something. But when I went to write it the whole thing just felt really wrong. So I had to do a pretty major rewrite so Rachel could survive, which changed a lot of stuff :P But regardless, I’m glad she’s likable. I don’t have the slightest clue what I’m going to do with her now, of course, but she’s still around xD You know, that’s another reason why I wanted to keep Rachel alive; to let her and Snow end their conflict peacefully. I figured that might be pretty unexpected considering Snow’s track record thus far, and also because Rachel is neither crazy nor a bad person. She’s just a mom who had her daughter taken from her, so she has good reasons for the things she does even if they aren’t very nice things :P It just felt really bad to kill her when she’s probably one of the characters that deserves it the least.

I went back and forth for a long time over whether Snow should tell Rachel about Tony and Miranda. I had a version where she doesn’t tell her that I planned on using, but once again it never felt right when I tried to let them resolve the conflict peacefully. With Snow telling her, the information sort of breaks her. It kind of kills her desire for revenge in a way. Without that, Rachel’s change of heart didn’t quite fit. As for what Rachel will do now that she knows, well like I said before, I have no idea xD I have no immediate plans for Rachel at the moment so I doubt we’ll see much of her until the sequel because I really don’t have the space to fit her in and I need time to figure out what sort of trouble she can get herself into. Plus, I already know what Tony will be doing up through the ending, so I imagine Rachel will just be plotting her revenge against Tony over these next few chapters. Heh, I think it’s pretty safe to say that JTG is serious when she says she knows everything, so yeah she probably knows all about Rachel’s offer. JTG sees all :P

I think I’ve said it before (I honestly can’t remember :P) but so much more happened on Labor Day than has been revealed. It would be pretty difficult, approaching impossible to put all the pieces together. Mainly because you’re assembling the puzzle with only half of the pieces and the picture on the box belongs to a completely different puzzle xD If you did manage to figure it all out, I’d be extremely impressed. Not because I’m that good of a mystery writer or that you’re not more than capable of figuring out what I’m up to but because there’s just not enough information out there to do so. I don’t think :P Thanks again for commenting :)

Latest Review
04/21/17

C. M. Brighid Bachleda

For: No Strings

Rating:
Wow...that was a bit scary but good...
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