Revolution H By: Leaf Soto
Towards Tomorrow By: Esca Skye
Nettlewhite: A Novel of Redwall By: Kled, the Cantankerous Cavalier
Trust me By: Fatum 03
Libera Nocte By: Misa Chikanatsu
A New Beginning By: Allyson Andrews
For: Smoke and Mirrors
It's another good chapter, it really is.
Ember in action was actually really handled well. You're making her out to be quite a viable character. We now understand why people are cautious around her, & there were little things - like neglecting to wear anything resembling camouflage because she was confident in her skills - that really made her stand out. Being more like herself around Kaleb was a welcome addition, as well. I felt like she was falling a little bit too quickly in the previous chapter, but this evens it out well.
Again some small grammar & spelling errors, but seriously nothing that a simple round of editing won't fix. The story is going places, I genuinely don't know what's going to happen next, & that's part of the appeal for me at the moment.