Stalk, a Drama story | SparkaTale

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Stalk

By: Kain Delo

Status: Completed

Summary:

Nothing added up. What was happening to Ken? Why would he do something like this to Lucy?

Created: November 18, 2014 | Updated: November 18, 2014

Genre : Drama

Language : English

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        Oooh I like your introduction. This is written very well and aside from some very minor spelling errors that I've already forgotten about it has no mistakes that I can complain of. It does tend to drag on a little bit around the middle, but not because your details are excessive- your details are perfect- it's just that a few times it seemed to lose focus, but only for a few seconds before returning to the story. Anyway, I enjoy it and I really hope you're going to continue writing this because I'll read more. :)

        November 20, 2014 | The Tigress