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Eamersdr -Dreamers - Years & Leagues by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
Aaeson Dharil sails the seas under the Antschmer Aes name, seizing ships unfortunate enough to cross his path and plundering their loot to fund his mission. When he encounters an Elven ship - a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity - he instead encounters a desperate plea for help that affects not only him, but Rongholdst at large. Set in a vital part of its lore & the Dark Ages of Medevil Europe. A prequel to 'Eamersdr - Dreamers' - A collaboration with Emi Valladarez. *Cover photo featuring Avril Lavigne - Head Above Water 2019*

Updated: September 25, 2019 | Published: August 24, 2019 | Reviews: 1

In Love with Air by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
Jake is a ghost, one of many who lives in New York City. He believes that there's a reason why he lingers there, and roams through the entire city in search of it. Peter is a student of Central Park East High, still reeling from a personal tragedy, distancing himself from his friends and loved ones. Their paths could never cross... and somehow, they do, for reasons neither could expect. Second novel in my LGBT saga, re-written. Contains dark themes such as depression, suicide and loss.

Updated: September 30, 2020 | Published: October 16, 2019 | Reviews: 0

Palindrome by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
Alice Gibson and Melissa Anderson have never met, and they never will. Connected by a condition that affects only a dozen people in the world, they live their lives as best they can, though neither one expects the influence they have on one another. Third novel in my LGBT saga, same-sex lesbian relationships. Contains themes such as disassociation and gaslighting.

Updated: August 25, 2020 | Published: May 11, 2020 | Reviews: 0

My Body Belongs to the Ocean by Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) In Progress
A one-chapter story about a dream I had one particular night. Trigger Warnings for depression, suicide and suicidal thoughts.

Updated: May 21, 2022 | Published: August 14, 2020 | Reviews: 0

Tears Of The Sky by Mohannad ilkarbal@gmail.com In Progress
In a land where humans live under the claws of wars , death , and shadows of men that has nothing but greed to live on , a time where the weak , has nothing to do but find the safest place they can find , crawl under there and wait for their death to visit sooner or later , In a place name The "Athorra" Village there was no hope , everything turned to grey until one day the sun of hope started rising again with a new face of a hero that has come to change everything to the good . at least those were his intentions , but what the Destiny holds for him is fr different from what he hoped ,,,

Updated: June 5, 2019 | Published: July 12, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Shadeless by Mohannad ilkarbal@gmail.com Completed
The night was dark cold and so silent , except for the sound of the rain drops hitting the concrete ground , while the partial moon is shining on the wet street making it look like a mirror reflecting the emotions and fears of all those walking over it a pale looking middle aged man wearing a big rain coat , he looked so tired , he is Gabriel , he couldnt sleep for along time now , this is his journey as he discovers something horrible , something that froze the blood on his veins and changed everything to the worse

Updated: January 3, 2015 | Published: January 3, 2015 | Reviews: 2

Wish Making For Idiots by David Goff Completed
Have you ever been in one of those situations where you just KNOW your wish is stupid? Have you ever had a genie stare at you as your indecision catches you? Have you ever looked back and said, "Man, I'm an idiot?" Well fear not, mortal, for the excellent guidebook Wishmaking for Idiots is here to lead you to your non destruction. Happy Wishing!

Updated: April 15, 2018 | Published: September 13, 2014 | Reviews: 0

Drowning by Gracie Rose Completed
Just a little sad drabble I wrote to conquer my writers block

Updated: January 22, 2015 | Published: January 22, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Shout Of Rebellion by Gracie Rose In Progress
When the Fate of an entire nation rests in the hands of two youths who could not be more different, hard choices must be made and sacrifices must be given. Forced to work side-by-side in a war caused by the one they call leader, these two Unchosen must stand strong in the face of hardship and terror to save those who are innocent, and repel the darkness that is returning to claim what it lost. This is....The Shout of Rebellion. PENDING FURTHER THOUGHT!! ON TEMPPRARY HIATUS!!

Updated: January 20, 2016 | Published: January 16, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Truthless - Series 1 by Gracie Rose In Progress
A thousand years into the future, humanity has spread across the galaxy, making a home on the distant worlds of the Nexus System. Earth is but a distant memory now, or so most would have you believe. But all is not well in the new planets, trouble stirs in the seats of power and, soon, harsh secrets will be revealed, secrets that could destroy everything humanity has worked so hard to achieve. It is up to four people, with buried pasts more dangerous than they ever could have known, to stop the destruction of everything they know and love... FIRST DRAFT! PLEASE DON'T FLAME!

Updated: August 2, 2017 | Published: August 1, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Shinda Yō Ni Suru Ni Wa (To Be Dead) by Michael Mann In Progress
Inoue Yuki's best friend Kurosawa Mariko's family and self have been slaughtered by some merc for hire. Yuki was blinded in the process of protecting her friend. 12 years later Things start to get weird and everyone she knows Is dieing. If something isn't done in time, Everyone in the world could end up dead. Please critique. If it seems like the plot is driving Yuki and not visa versa, then mission accomplished, that's what I was going for. This is just the first draft, things may change in the second draft.

Updated: January 29, 2015 | Published: January 15, 2015 | Reviews: 2

Into The Dark by Michael Mann In Progress
The young Kyle Lane is kidnapped and forced to play in a game, where the only rule is kill your opponent before time runs out. PLEASE CRITIQUE.

Updated: February 4, 2015 | Published: January 23, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Crisis Averted by Michael Mann In Progress
1000 Years after the Earth has been targeted by a laser called Earth Buster, A new threat appears, The Juric Impact System, a collection of Kinetic Bombardment Rods, has been targeted at Earth. It is up to Joshua Collin to stop this menace. Please Critique

Updated: January 30, 2015 | Published: January 30, 2015 | Reviews: 0

X by Michael Mann Completed
A young man and Murderer was kidnapped and thrown into a forest with Nine other people. He must work together with these people to escape this nightmare of a forest. Please Critique

Updated: February 22, 2015 | Published: January 30, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Don't Look by Michael Mann In Progress
Anna, A little girl who was born into a research center, is put under many tests designed to heighten A human's senses, turns her into a killing machine. Dr. Harison must find a way to stop this girl from killing everyone in this world.

Updated: February 4, 2015 | Published: February 4, 2015 | Reviews: 0

The Michael Mann Story Timeline List by Michael Mann In Progress
This is the timeline for my stories so far. Enjoy.

Updated: February 14, 2015 | Published: February 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Sky Night Lights by Michael Mann In Progress
I usually don't like this kind of stuff (Romance) But I got the Idea and Decided, Why Not!? This story is inspired by the song Fireflies. This Might end up as a Novella, but I'm not sure. Now for the actual Description. A Young Girl named Sweet Davenport wants to go to the sixth annual firefly watching festival, She wants to ask the boy she has a crush on to go to the thing with her. But things don't go as well as she wanted them to.

Updated: February 17, 2015 | Published: February 11, 2015 | Reviews: 1

Alphabet Hunter by Michael Mann In Progress
Zachary Djre is chosen to be the successor to the organization, The Alphabet, when he was young. Ever since then, he's been looking for the man that killed everyone that he knew to get his revenge. he soon finds out that in order to even see this man again, he must kill every member of The Alphabet before getting to this man. Zachary must prove that he has what it takes to take on this man, and avenge his fallen comrades. PLEASE CRITIQUE.

Updated: February 25, 2015 | Published: February 12, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Fighters Spirit by James Light by Michael Mann Completed
FIGHTER'S SPIRIT IS CANCELED BECAUSE JAMES GOT THE CRAP SUED OUT OF HIM! this is a story my friend James Light is writing. He asked me to put it up on this site for him, because he doesn't have an account and doesn't feel like making one. It is fan made and are four parts. The Star Wars part, The Yugioh Part, the Dragon Ball Z part, and the Demon Chronicles. Star Wars is owned by Disney, Yugioh is owned by Konami, Dragon Ball Z is owned by a bunch of people, and Demon Chronicles is owned by me, Michael Mann. James is the main character, and Even I'm a character in this. I'm probably the funniest character in it even. If you think the story is stupid, then congratulations, even James thinks it's stupid. but it's funny. Enjoy, and give feedback. I will relay all feedback to James.

Updated: July 28, 2015 | Published: February 25, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Rechardé by Michael Mann In Progress
A Vampire named Luna is targeted by a many people. they either want to kill her or capture her, either way, nothing good is happening, but she still tries to live a normal life with her friends. Warning, This story contains some violence, foul language, and sexual themes, viewer discretion advised, you have been warned.

Updated: June 25, 2015 | Published: March 5, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Fabric of Fate by Michael Mann In Progress

Updated: March 22, 2015 | Published: March 22, 2015 | Reviews: 0

X by Michael Mann Completed
This story is a remake of the first X. It was full of mistakes and this one is just ... TEN times better HAHAHAHA.... Because the title of the story is ten.... anyways. This story is about a girl named Jewel (in the original it was about Levi, but don't worry, he's still in this story) And she's kidnapped and thrown into a forest and is forced to do puzzles to escape.

Updated: July 29, 2015 | Published: June 24, 2015 | Reviews: 1

The Walking Dead by Michael Mann In Progress
This is a Fan made story of The Walking Dead, it is in no way canon, but it is written as if it were canon with the comics and the video game. This story follows the character David as he struggles through the walker outbreak with the rest of his group.

Updated: July 9, 2015 | Published: June 25, 2015 | Reviews: 0

The Wrong Crowd by Michael Mann In Progress
Eva Hawkins is a girl who likes to hang out with the punks of her school. A new kid has come to school which is starting to stir up trouble with her and her ex boyfriend. This story is inspired by this by the animated short. Luigi's Day Out.

Updated: July 10, 2015 | Published: July 8, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Pokemon Omega Ruby by Michael Mann In Progress
Attention, I do not own pokemon or most of the characters shown, however I do own some characters. anyone reading this is assumed to be a fan of pokemon and by extension, is expected to know what each pokemon looks like, thus, I will not be going into any detail for most pokemon with a few exceptions, The characters Michael, Madison, and James, are also all real people who happen to be my friends. except for Michael, because I'm Michael.

Updated: October 27, 2015 | Published: October 22, 2015 | Reviews: 0