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Female Crusading Virtue Girls: The Third Crusade by Benjamin Dine In Progress
The Virtue Girls now have to face the Trio of Death: Nero, Jezebel, and the revived Ch'arut'yuny. As the end of this age draws more and more near, the fate of mankind as well as the entirety of the Earth now rests on their shoulders. The girls know that the Apocalypse is approaching but it is unknown what the outcome shall be. Who will be victorious? Light or Darkness? This is the climatic conclusion of the Female Crusading Virtue Girls saga.

Updated: July 9, 2016 | Published: March 25, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Unbreakable by I-am-happy Just-So-You-Know In Progress
“They were and agency of murderers and liars. Her only consolation was that they murdered and lied for good.” When Ria Matthews was called up to level 52, she never expected to be handed the reins on the most important mission: train the Unbreakable. He was the perfect weapon: stronger, smarter, more agile. Designed to dismember the rebellion before it could really take off. But Ria’s gotten more than she bargained for. The weapon is a little too human, and his “clean slate” may not be so clean. So what happens when her star-gazing, smoking buddy starts remembering his life before he volunteered? Ria can’t know who to trust anymore when her world is thrust into a whirlwind and lies come uncovered. But she’s in too deep and has too much blood on her hands too turn back now; her only way out is to charge at it head on. Too bad she’ll be taking those closest to her down in the process.

Updated: May 15, 2015 | Published: May 14, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Crickets by Uriah Piwari In Progress
A world without conscience, a gambler without purpose, a waitress without hope. "Humanity needed a wrecking ball, and when we didn’t get it we started to think we could do whatever we wanted, why deny our obvious animal nature any longer, the threat of consequence faded and as it did, men became monsters" Crickets is a story about trying to be a good person, in a decaying world.

Updated: May 14, 2015 | Published: May 14, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Witchers Weed by Cho and Gall In Progress
Seren, a young black witch moth, stricken with blindness since the day she was born, has nothing. Her kindly adoptive father has passed this season, allowing the local officials to possess her home. The other insects in her village shun her for the history of her kind's heinous practice of dark sorcery in the past, making life that much more difficult. The only thing keeping Seren from giving up is the hope that lies in her soul, and the sheer will to keep going forward, no matter the situation. Her entire, bleak, sightless existence changes forever one day, as an enigmatic stranger comes to the village. The character, whom she soon finds out is another black witch going by the name of Striga Witchweed, is a rumored practitioner of black magic, netting him a sour reputation by the locals the moment he arrives. After Seren pulls him out of a dreadful predicament, Striga gratefully agrees to let her to leave the hamlet with him, and gives her a new purpose as well. To become his apprentice.

Updated: January 31, 2017 | Published: January 17, 2016 | Reviews: 0

The Glade by Cho and Gall In Progress
Within the furthest depths of an ancient forest, Herne, a young spirit of the foreboding woodland, makes her home. After a long period of peace comes over the untamed land, a human suddenly ventures into the woods, shattering the tranquility with his very presence. Bearing a deep grudge against his kind from an incident that occurred many years before, Herne doesn't take his invasion into her territory very well. As she attempts to force him to leave under the threat of death, the human in turn takes an interest in the fae being.

Updated: November 6, 2016 | Published: August 2, 2016 | Reviews: 0

The Heart of a Starchild by Cho and Gall In Progress
Warwick, a savage creature born from perverse science and alchemy, uses his abilities to rid the streets of Zaun of the rampant crime that infests it, if only to curb his murderous instincts and to make up for the sins he made when he was still a man. Upon hunting down one such criminal to the peaceful island nation of Ionia and suffering grievous injuries from the fight, he is found and cared for by a kindly being named Soraka.

Updated: September 14, 2017 | Published: July 26, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Wolf Dressed In Moonlight by Natii Georgievaa In Progress
"No one believes in werewolves, vampires, fairies and witches. I 'll recognize I didn't believe too, but when strange things started to happen all around me, I couldn't close my eyes for the obvious - she said and crossed her arms."

Updated: August 5, 2015 | Published: August 5, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Light Up My Sky by diane sky Completed
He didn't know her name, or where she came from or what her life was like. He knew but two things about her – she held the sky captive in her eyes, and he loved her hopelessly, deeply, endlessly. "I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. (I think I made you up inside my head.)" -Sylvia Plath

Updated: March 16, 2016 | Published: December 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0

Smoke and Mirrors by diane sky Completed
It is a time of dragons scorching the sky line. In Thebbington Abbey, Ember Blackthorne earns her living as a thief. When she crosses paths with both a humble, kind jeweler's son and a wicked, irresistible pirate, she learns that the world often catches fire and legends often beat reality.

Updated: September 30, 2016 | Published: March 23, 2016 | Reviews: 1

Poison and Wine by diane sky Completed
It started on a 4th of July. It ended on a 4th of July. And in between the two of them, I allowed Paul to captivate me like a firework show. I recognized the poison on his lips and I still choked on it. And he sipped on the fire in my veins like a fine wine.

Updated: July 25, 2017 | Published: October 24, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Seven devils by diane sky In Progress
The world has reached the point beyond redemption. Again. From beneath the crust of the earth are awoken the seven deadly sins, coming to ensure humanity's perdition. A great war between sin and virtue. A civil war within a single man, meant to either doom or save his kin. And the greatest sin of all, crawling under his skin. Murder.

Updated: October 5, 2017 | Published: August 2, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Ill Omens by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Takes place in 1888 London, written in a form of diary entries. While Jack the Ripper terrorizes White Chapel , a series of strange events and omens interrupt the daily lives of several people.

Updated: July 3, 2019 | Published: December 6, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Collection of Short Horror Stories by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
A Collection of my short horror stories

Updated: October 13, 2019 | Published: January 19, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Black Rain by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
For as long as most remember the black rain has always fell. Born from the dark curse power the Black rain twists and corrupts endlessly. But one man still fights, the one who remembers the lost days of the sun.

Updated: July 31, 2020 | Published: June 19, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Rainy Morning by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
I wanted to try something new. The title might change. Depending on the reviews i might makes into a full lenght book.

Updated: November 29, 2017 | Published: November 29, 2017 | Reviews: 0

Adventure Party: the forest crypts campaign by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
My friend and i got into role playing games. i figured our game might make for an interesting story so i'm writing it down. Our party : a human monk, a mage, an elf fighter and an elf ranger. You can now see what the characters look like : https://www.deviantart.com/blackheartravensoul

Updated: July 6, 2020 | Published: August 12, 2018 | Reviews: 0

Ghost Raiders: The Ghost Hunting Road Trip by Blackheart Ravensoul Completed
A story about me, my friends , a road trip and some ghosts. Some events are real and happened to me or people i personally know and some are made up.

Updated: August 17, 2019 | Published: August 21, 2018 | Reviews: 0

Spiral Garden by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Adel was a normal girl living a normal life until one day there was a break in into her apartment and the world turned upside down. A doll-maker Pamela takes Adel into her care, but she is secretly a magus helping the police investigate paranormal cases. There has been a strange phenomenon going thought the city - normal people suddenly gain magical abilities. Supernatural, horror, violence, mature themes, trigger warnings.

Updated: May 4, 2020 | Published: January 13, 2019 | Reviews: 0

Gvera Cross Extras by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Stories Explaining the world of Gvera Cross and it's history, magic and many other things.

Updated: July 8, 2020 | Published: February 17, 2019 | Reviews: 0

Our Story by Yin Harmony In Progress
Everyone has a story right? Like how they got together, how they were born, when the scraped their knees? A story has a beginning, middle and end. Well, our's doesn't have an end..not yet anyway.

Updated: March 21, 2017 | Published: February 6, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Book of Emotions by Yin Harmony In Progress
A collection of vent stories and poems. Rated Teen for cursing.

Updated: August 29, 2017 | Published: April 26, 2016 | Reviews: 0

Wicked Series: No One Mourns the Wicked by Yin Harmony Completed
No one mourns the wicked No one cries "They won't return!" No one lays a lily on their grave The good man scorns the wicked! Through their lives, our children learn What we miss, when we misbehave: And Goodness knows The wicked's lives are lonely Goodness knows The wicked die alone It just shows when you're wicked You're left only On your own Yes, Goodness knows The wicked's lives are lonely Goodness knows The wicked cry alone Nothing grows for the wicked They reap only What they've sown Are people born wicked? Or do they have Wickedness thrust upon them? After all, she had A father. She had a mother, as so many do:

Updated: May 23, 2016 | Published: May 15, 2016 | Reviews: 1

No Strings by Yin Harmony Completed
I got no strings to hold me down, to make me fret or make me frown. There. Are. No. Strings. On. Us.

Updated: September 26, 2017 | Published: September 6, 2016 | Reviews: 2

Cracks: Book 1 by Yin Harmony In Progress
I'll be home soon.. I'm right down the street... I want to go home.. Home... Where is home... My home is gone, since they're gone... My home...my life...my heart...Why?

Updated: December 1, 2016 | Published: October 13, 2016 | Reviews: 0

The Nine by Yin Harmony In Progress
Screams erupted everywhere in the city. Alleyways, apartments, condos, buildings, nowhere was safe from them. They owned the city, no the world, and they knew it.

Updated: June 20, 2018 | Published: December 8, 2016 | Reviews: 0