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Cover Art By: Gracie Rose
Crystal Bachleda
A Reader and a Writer

Comments: 16 | Reviews: 6


Retrograde Heartbreak

I'm a 21 years old female from the USA with a desire to create.

I've been writing for as long as I can remember and love the writing community. I love the willingness to help others that every author I've met has. I'll help if I can because I find that my strong suits. when it comes to critiquing, consist of noticing plot holes and empty characters, correcting scene arrangements and having a Reader's and Writer's perspective.

I have a club started for the technical aspects of story writing, (ex. plot creation, prologues, dialogue, etc...)

PM me if you want me to take a look at your story or if you have any questions concerning my method of critiquing.

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Oko San

My name's Oko-san and I like writing stories for people to enjoy. You see, my overall goal is to make people stuck in a fantasy world where they yearn to be in and if anything, be happy on to what I've given. I will gladly give you advice on anything (Thought, I'm still learning literature myself!) or to have a small conversation if you PM me. I know I've neglected this account (and many others), but I'm mainly active on Quotev. I'm trying to set up a 'decent' schedule  for myself where I mainly update on Quotev first and copy&paste onto here and other accounts every Friday (And if I don't; you have the full rights to call me a chicken). You can also contact me on Wattpad. I don't mind working together (Simply giving out ideas, because I don't know if having two authors work here)  nor mind helping you. It's understandable to have a good hook on readers into reading such good books. Again, I apologize for neglecting this account. Here is what I have planned in 2015: 

1) Dune:Cursive Shadows- This is one of my most important story projects I have planned for quite sometime. It used to be 'A Blessing Curse', but I changed the direction of the story since I notice a lot of people didn't seem attracted to it nor giving no comments whatsoever on how it was or the progress. It takes place in Nashville, TN where in third-perspective view, a lady named Penny must find out what happened to a party, she attended to, and how it's been wiped under the rug. [PLACED ON HOLD]

2) [REDOING] Deféndu- I decided to redo it since my writing has improved and I didn't like my sudden ending rush. Plus I'll be attempting to upload pictures of the characters in my album, see how that would work out...  This story is based off an crazy anime I saw once and inspired me to one of my own.

3) Pastro:Risen- A more of a serious type fantasy, in which will be in first person. Still in development.  

*There is more stories, but I would like to complete them first before placing them here. Have a good day!

  

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Kain Delo

Hey there! I'm Kain. An eighteen year-old Political Science student that's been writing for roughly six years now.

There isn't much that you need to know about me to enjoy my stories. I'm just a random recluse who just so happened to stumble upon the world of writing at the age of eleven, thought it would be nice to write my own stories and started out as a crappy writer with much to improve. Since then, I've gone to become a much better writer that feels like writing is the only place she will ever be fully comfortable in.

I'm a geek that reads books, writes stories, goes to school, volunteers and has fun with life. A lot of people find me arrogant despite my friendly nature. Oh well, it's their loss not mine. I'm happy with the friends that I really have since most of them are like me or even worse (better?). 

Mostly, I write about things that I see in my daily life. Some of them significant, others not so. Other than writing stories, I also write essays and journalism articles. The genres I dabble on the most are Young Adult, Romance and Comedy, although sometimes, I write some dark shit that I don't post because I get too freaked out to finish them.

Comments: 29 | Reviews: 1


Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant)

Hi all,

This page is now dormant. If you would like to continue messaging feel free to follow the link below:
- Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dannypowerhallihan/

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Mohannad ilkarbal@gmail.com

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David Goff

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Gracie Rose

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Michael Mann

Guess who just learned how to make his bio! MEEEEEEE!

I'm not entirely sure what to put here, so how about I tell you about myself.

first of, I'm a huge nerd! I love so many things that a nerd would love such as video games but we'll get to that later.

Remember when I said I would get to the video games later? (Yeah, like two seconds ago) We'll here you go. Video games are a huge part of my life, I've been a gamer ever since I was little. I mostly love RPGs, such as Pokemon. But I love a lot of other games too. A lot of my stories are based on video games that I like... Okay, so one of them are based on a video game that I like... Anyways. I love the walking dead tell tale video games series, and my favorite video game series is Zero Escape.

I also love to make things, weather it's out of clay or with legos. I guess drawing and writing kind of fall into that too don't they?

If I wasn't a writer, I wouldn't even be on this site, so YAY FOR LITIRITURE!

​The only stories of mine that you will see on here, are the ones that I have high hopes for, and so far, all of these stories take place in the same universe

This was long, but if you made it to the end... I'll... Give you a high five.

And don't forget to check out my friend Prenn Cooder's profile as well.

If you want to ask me anything, feel free to PM me, I promise I won't bite, but I might nibble a bit.

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Rae Gafford

How do I delete this account?

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Leah Soto

I like writing, anime, art, music, and videogames. Feel free to pick anything from my library. I don't mind being messaged about anything. If you wish to chat with me, go right ahead. I'll be more than happy to answer. If you leave a comment or review, I'll leave one on your work.

About me, well I can't say much. I'm just a single British kid who's living in the United States.

I have a Patreon account, so if you truly enjoy my work here then a monthly pledge would most definitely help with the publishing.

I guess that's all. Thank you for your time.

~ LS

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Jeremy Powell

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Hannah Sullivant

I RETURN ALL COMMENTS AND REVIEWS! Thank you.

 

Hello! :D My name is Hannah and (obviously) I'm the author of the stories you can see here. (And I would also love it if you took a second to read them... Just sayin'.)

I really love writing because, truthfully, I'd rather control the story than wait in suspense as someone else pulls me along on an anticipation string. I write fanfiction as well if you'd like to read that too. However, I don't like changing what the original authors characters would behave... So usually when I write fanfiction, I put in an OC (original character, for those who don't know what OC means) and try to imagine how the characters would react to this new species being thrown into their natural habit. LOL

As for updating, sometimes I'll draw a blank as to what will come next in the story, so I just let the story completely leave my mind, maybe even for a whole year, and then read over what I already wrote and come up with an idea, so... you might want to keep that in mind when reading my stories.

I never discontinue stories unless no one ever lets me know they're reading it. So if I put up a story, I might update it to have about five or so chapters and if no one reviews, sends me a PM, follows, favorites, you know, good stuff like that, then I'll just take it down cause the pattern just gives that all the story's doing is taking up space on the Internet.

Fanart for covers is beyond appreciated. If you send me any fanart that belongs to you, not only will you be my favorite-est person in all the whole wide worlds, put I'll put your username at the beginning of the summary, right next to the picture. Sounds great, yeah? Hasn't happened yet, but hey, I'm still cool with it.  Don't blame a girl for wishing.

Thank you so much for bothering to read my bio! (Even though it's not really a bio...) Thank you for being such wonderful readers!

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Alexandria Francetic

I am announcing that as of today, all of my stories have been transferred to FictionPress.com under the pen name manaphyseaangel101. I will no longer be posting stories on this account due to posting errors and technical difficulties. Thank you for your understanding. I apologize for this inconvenience.

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Benjamin Dine

I'm Benjamin Dine. I am a writer as a hobby. I usually like to write either stories or poems and came here to get a fresh start.

I am a Kent State University graduate with a Bachelor's in Sociology.
Nowadays, I have become a member of the Canton Writer's Guild.

Some of the genres I like are fantasy, primarily. But I can take mild horror (if it's only a part of the story and not the main story) and science fiction. And I am an anime/manga fan too. I do make some satire and social commentary, so just be aware in case something like that shows up. I also have a tendency of being pious.
I have Asperger's Syndrome and have met the challenges that it faces.

Ultimately, I am to write in the fantasy genre as my primary genre.

My stuff can also be viewed on Fictionpress.com and Fanfiction.net.
It is under the pen name: B. J. Williams

I hope to be reviewed and commented on in the future with my works. I'll try my best to be just and fair when judging.

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. I'll be happy to answer questions.

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Current Works
Female Crusading Virtue Girls
"Nickname: The Crossroads of Sailor Moon and Narnia"
A magical girl story following Maria Ciliega and her friends as they defend the upright and just in a world who views goodness as being archaic and hindering.

Soon to be Works
Bloodlines of Janochia series
"Nickname: The Lineage campagin of Dungeons & Dragons"

This series of novels follows the bloodline of Idolus Troigia Romero Noxamor.
This is supposed to be based on a series of D&D adventure games.
But none of the games have gotten very far.

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Notes
Please state in the PM how to make the story better or have ideas for works.
You can also say what you liked and didn't like in the work.
 

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