Trapped, a Humor story | SparkaTale

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Trapped

By: RT 13

Status: Completed

Summary:

I'm trapped in a metal cage. Again. 55 word short story.

Created: August 17, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013

Genre : Humor

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 3

Favorites: 1

Reads: 297


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Total Wordcount: 55

Reviews (1)


  • Liz uli

    Actually, I really loved this. Captured so much in a few words. I find myself conflicted to give a five-star rating, especially to a story with less than a hundred words, but this definitely deserves it. Nice job.

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    November 13, 2013 Flag


Comments / Critiques


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    Can you explain because I don't get it :)

    August 18, 2013 | Timmie Tots


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    It's about someone trapped in a trash can/rubbish bin and then the janitor finds the person who is constantly stuffed in trash cans, presumably by bullies. Sorry that I couldn't make it clearer with the word limit. I'll try to improve on that.

    August 19, 2013 | RT 13


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    Oooooh right now I see why it's funny :)

    August 19, 2013 | Timmie Tots