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Forest of Silence by Leah Soto Completed
This Forest has many names...

Updated: October 26, 2016 | Published: October 26, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Another Minecraft Story from the Other Side by Leah Soto In Progress
This story takes place years later, after Kaja learned her first lesson. (Contains more heavy swearing and violence)

Updated: April 20, 2017 | Published: April 18, 2017 | Reviews: 0


A Playwright of War by Leah Soto In Progress
Based on a really strange dream I had, this story is about how a group of Drama students perform a really strange play about the old military leader, R.J. Cleveland. (Sorry about the cover... Mr. Takei was the stage director so... yeah. Also, the 4th wall isn't just broken, it's obliterated.)

Updated: April 27, 2017 | Published: April 24, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Armor and Ammo by Leah Soto In Progress
A fan-fiction of the characters from the popular mobile game Armor Blitz. World War 1 & 2 era tanks in human form. Girl form to be precise. This little gem is a story I'll create using the characters I have in-game. So it'll change constantly. If you've wanted to read about a harem of tank-girls then this is the one for you! Please Enjoy. (Side note: There will be graphic violence as this is a military vehicle-based story. Some language, in the form of both swears and, I'm ashamed to admit, poor translations, so I'm obligated to advise you have an online translator handy, and I would like to apologize if anyone is offended.)

Updated: July 20, 2020 | Published: August 28, 2017 | Reviews: 0


A Dog's Life by Leah Soto Completed
This short story tells us how a German Shepard lived his life with a young family.

Updated: November 7, 2017 | Published: November 7, 2017 | Reviews: 0


The Rules of All Roads: A Hotwheels Story by Leah Soto In Progress
This is going to be a story about Hotwheels, you know, the tiny toy cars you see for 94 cents? Anyway, based on what I've been seeing and the fact my collection of cars has surpassed 300, I figured it was time to write a story about them. I'll figure out a plot later, but right now I'm just trying to get things together as I go.

Updated: May 5, 2019 | Published: December 28, 2018 | Reviews: 0


Witch House: Tales of Insomnia by Leah Soto In Progress
Just some average darker story about witchcraft. A group of exiled witches from foreign lands are brought together under the forceful hand of the Warrior Queen Rohanna of Versailles as they fight the Corrupted King Dericcio of the Holy Empire as they discover the truth of his corruption and fight their way through numerous trials along the way to the greatest battle of their age.

Updated: October 6, 2019 | Published: August 13, 2019 | Reviews: 0


Rerouted Pipes: A Steampunk Story by Leah Soto In Progress
I've always wanted to do one of these. A group of girls travel deep within their world to not only find out what makes it tick but also find out why the corrupt government is sorting power how they see fit. In this world, people need their steam power, but the pipes are being rerouted, and it's up to Yfryte, Rosso, Juul, and Nyumi to figure out why the pipes are moving.

Updated: November 21, 2019 | Published: September 30, 2019 | Reviews: 0


My Car is a What?! Second Gear by Leah Soto In Progress
The long-awaited sequel to one of my best modern projects. It's time to battle the terrorist SUV's in a fight of life or death. Can Schwarze and her rag-tag team of a wide range of new and used vehicles fight them off?

Updated: March 26, 2024 | Published: May 19, 2020 | Reviews: 1


My Car is a What?! Vaporwave Edition by Leah Soto In Progress
Another iteration in my famous franchise, however, this is a standalone story taking place in the '80s. Follow the crime sprees of our main characters, a Lamborghini Countach and a Ferrari Testarossa in an amazing coke-riddled trip across the states. (Oh, and swearing and violence warning.)

Updated: March 26, 2024 | Published: July 15, 2021 | Reviews: 0


My Car is a What?! Nostalgia Edition by Leah Soto In Progress
Ah, the 1990's, a simpler time, times of great advancements in the automotive world, and the world in general. This little adventure idea I've been toying with the last few days is a look back on the '90s, so feel free to let me know if anything is off or should be added. A story of how a young girl with an amazing ability goes on a journey of self-discovery and how she comes to accept her ability.

Updated: March 26, 2024 | Published: August 2, 2021 | Reviews: 0


The Boy of Migia by Leah Soto In Progress
I decided to write an isekai. Basically where someone from the standard human realm gets transported to another world via a magical summon or reincarnation. Anyway, this is the story about a young man of sorts who goes about on his adventures throughout a strange new world he's pretty much dropped into. Also, reader discretion is advised for the language, violence, and overall ecchi content.

Updated: April 18, 2022 | Published: November 24, 2021 | Reviews: 0


The Calldwell by Leah Soto In Progress
They look like trees, the size of skyscrapers off in the distance. But no, they are not trees. Using deafening silence, they have begun to eat away at humanity’s population. They know where we are but we don’t know how to stop them.

Updated: May 9, 2022 | Published: February 14, 2022 | Reviews: 0


Legend of Arterria by Leah Soto In Progress
Another story of mine. I'll try to make sure this one gets to a finished state. Anyway, a fantasy story, based on my current relationship. Typical adventure stuff going on, language, violence, and other fantasy adventure stuff from a world less politically correct.

Updated: May 5, 2024 | Published: July 17, 2023 | Reviews: 0


TAG: Tech Assault Group - Girl Troubles by Jeremy Powell In Progress
Jon Hall and Nicholas Briggs, high school Juniors by day, high tech armored heroes by night, are the sole protectors of Ringgold City. It's been a year since the nuking of a dozen cities across the globe had been pinned on the group, sparking the world war. With their name cleared and the group disbanded they still face threats from Red Eye, a group of terrorist 'vigilantes' convinced TAG was behind the attacks, and KATS, a group of super strong and agile feline themed cat burglars. But things are made worse when four classmates are brainwashed and endowed with incredible powers, the Elemental Sisters, are put on a crusade to destroy TAG. A situation complicated when one of the girls bent on destroying him Jon swore to a fallen comrade to protect. Matters are made worse when he must balance feelings for three separate young ladies, one of whom his best friend also has eyes for, handle news of who in his life knows his secret, and a huge announcement that will alter his personal life forever.

Updated: March 16, 2015 | Published: March 16, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Contentions by Hannah Sullivant In Progress
Princess Alara is forced to leave her home after her brother is assassinated. The newly crowned King Dala'kar is the prime suspect. When her party is caught trespassing through his country attempting to escape, she decides she's going to get to the bottom of why her world is suddenly turned upside down.

Updated: November 27, 2015 | Published: March 23, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Resuscitation by Hannah Sullivant In Progress
After the Great War, the countries of the world came together to create a way to keep the peace. The leaders decided that once a year, all young unmarried persons would meet in hope of marriage in order to mix the cultures. However, not many of the citizens involved like the idea of being forced into marriages with people they've only just met...

Updated: August 9, 2015 | Published: March 23, 2015 | Reviews: 1


Savages by Hannah Sullivant In Progress
Not long after the Great War ended, many of the survivors found themselves corrupted by a curse that gave them inhuman abilities and control over the elements. However, what they lost was control over themselves. The governments have declared all-out war on these "devils", killing them no matter who they are, or were.

Updated: March 23, 2015 | Published: March 23, 2015 | Reviews: 0


The Sun Will Still Rise by Hannah Sullivant In Progress
Laina, a young mage girl, travels through time to save the world from the evil magisters that enslaved it eras before.

Updated: November 27, 2015 | Published: November 16, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Female Crusading Virtue Girls: The First Crusade by Benjamin Dine Completed
This magical girl story follows Maria Ciliega; a normal lot attendant at a supermarket who was a dreamer. One day, while in the store's basement, she encounters a stranger whom tells her of great power she has and that she can become a heroine. But can she be able to handle the pressure of a heroine, especially being a magical girl? This is book 1 of 3. Warning: This story contains coarse language, mild crude humor, suggestive themes, satire, and social commentary. This story is rated "T" for teens.

Updated: June 20, 2015 | Published: April 8, 2015 | Reviews: 1


Female Crusading Virtue Girls: The Second Crusade by Benjamin Dine Completed
With the Virtue Girls now established, they now have a place in this world to call their own. But now, they are being threatened on having it taken away by the Deva Girls. But little do they know that there is a much darker force in the background, one who is messing with the strings of destiny. What terrifying secrets will be brought forward to the light of day? Book 2 of 3. Warning: This story contains coarse language, mild crude humor, suggestive themes, satire, and social commentary. This story is rated "T" for teens.

Updated: April 1, 2016 | Published: May 19, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Female Crusading Virtue Girls: Merry Little Christmas by Benjamin Dine Completed
This is the one-shot Christmas Special for the magical girl series. This can be read with or without reading the main series.

Updated: December 18, 2015 | Published: December 18, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Female Crusading Virtue Girls: The Third Crusade by Benjamin Dine In Progress
The Virtue Girls now have to face the Trio of Death: Nero, Jezebel, and the revived Ch'arut'yuny. As the end of this age draws more and more near, the fate of mankind as well as the entirety of the Earth now rests on their shoulders. The girls know that the Apocalypse is approaching but it is unknown what the outcome shall be. Who will be victorious? Light or Darkness? This is the climatic conclusion of the Female Crusading Virtue Girls saga.

Updated: July 9, 2016 | Published: March 25, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Unbreakable by I-am-happy Just-So-You-Know In Progress
“They were and agency of murderers and liars. Her only consolation was that they murdered and lied for good.” When Ria Matthews was called up to level 52, she never expected to be handed the reins on the most important mission: train the Unbreakable. He was the perfect weapon: stronger, smarter, more agile. Designed to dismember the rebellion before it could really take off. But Ria’s gotten more than she bargained for. The weapon is a little too human, and his “clean slate” may not be so clean. So what happens when her star-gazing, smoking buddy starts remembering his life before he volunteered? Ria can’t know who to trust anymore when her world is thrust into a whirlwind and lies come uncovered. But she’s in too deep and has too much blood on her hands too turn back now; her only way out is to charge at it head on. Too bad she’ll be taking those closest to her down in the process.

Updated: May 15, 2015 | Published: May 14, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Crickets by Uriah Piwari In Progress
A world without conscience, a gambler without purpose, a waitress without hope. "Humanity needed a wrecking ball, and when we didn’t get it we started to think we could do whatever we wanted, why deny our obvious animal nature any longer, the threat of consequence faded and as it did, men became monsters" Crickets is a story about trying to be a good person, in a decaying world.

Updated: May 14, 2015 | Published: May 14, 2015 | Reviews: 0