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Hello! :D My name is Hannah and (obviously) I'm the author of the stories you can see here. (And I would also love it if you took a second to read them... Just sayin'.)
I really love writing because, truthfully, I'd rather control the story than wait in suspense as someone else pulls me along on an anticipation string. I write fanfiction as well if you'd like to read that too. However, I don't like changing what the original authors characters would behave... So usually when I write fanfiction, I put in an OC (original character, for those who don't know what OC means) and try to imagine how the characters would react to this new species being thrown into their natural habit. LOL
As for updating, sometimes I'll draw a blank as to what will come next in the story, so I just let the story completely leave my mind, maybe even for a whole year, and then read over what I already wrote and come up with an idea, so... you might want to keep that in mind when reading my stories.
I never discontinue stories unless no one ever lets me know they're reading it. So if I put up a story, I might update it to have about five or so chapters and if no one reviews, sends me a PM, follows, favorites, you know, good stuff like that, then I'll just take it down cause the pattern just gives that all the story's doing is taking up space on the Internet.
Fanart for covers is beyond appreciated. If you send me any fanart that belongs to you, not only will you be my favorite-est person in all the whole wide worlds, put I'll put your username at the beginning of the summary, right next to the picture. Sounds great, yeah? Hasn't happened yet, but hey, I'm still cool with it. Don't blame a girl for wishing.
Thank you so much for bothering to read my bio! (Even though it's not really a bio...) Thank you for being such wonderful readers!
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Very interesting start as far as plot. I enjoyed it. :) It seemed to be a little short however, but I have seen smaller. I usually try to write 1500 to 2500 words, but many people write even longer that that (anywhere from 4000 to 10000 words). Usually this isn't a huge problem as long as you try to extend the descriptions. For example, explaining what the demon looked like (like "he appeared almost human except for his frighteningly yellow cat-like eyes" or "he had maroon colored fur and horns coming out from the sides of his head" or whatever he looked like in your mind). Descriptions are sometimes a very easy thing to forget since you know what they look like in your mind, but your readers only know what you write.
This is just a "me" thing, it might not bother other people as much, but I think it could eliminate confusing if you italicize any thoughts your characters have. For example, [My name is Genesis, your beginning.] I believe would look better if you wrote it like [My name is Genesis, your beginning.] so your readers will know when it is a thought and when your character is using description.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Commented on: March 27, 2015
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Thanks so much for your comment! I'll be sure to go back and fix that error. Sometimes when I'm writing, I get so engrossed in just getting the story written that I forget about little things l like that, and it tends to get worse as the chapter nears the end.
Commented on: March 26, 2015
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'Finding Eden' - A collaboration with Danny Power
Wow, this is so well written! This is almost as professional as published works in my opinion. The picture seems so clear in my head and I can almost feel the emotion. Really good job, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
The only error I found in it was this: "Watching him when we watched me right back." It could be a sentence fragment (although it's perfectly fine in context), but the main issue was with the word "we". I assumed you meant "he", but it's just a simple error, so no worries.
Commented on: March 25, 2015
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Very interesting! I originally thought this would be some sort of a sci-fi thing the way it started, but it's actually very much fantasy in its way. I'm curious to know how it goes.
Commented on: March 23, 2015