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Female Crusading Virtue Girls: The First Crusade

By: Benjamin Dine

Status: Completed

Summary:

This magical girl story follows Maria Ciliega; a normal lot attendant at a supermarket who was a dreamer. One day, while in the store's basement, she encounters a stranger whom tells her of great power she has and that she can become a heroine. But can she be able to handle the pressure of a heroine, especially being a magical girl? This is book 1 of 3. Warning: This story contains coarse language, mild crude humor, suggestive themes, satire, and social commentary. This story is rated "T" for teens.

Created: April 8, 2015 | Updated: June 20, 2015

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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  • David Donnan

    I realy like your story its very great. Magical girls are my favorite stories

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    This book is actually quite interesting! I love all kinds of magical girl stories, like Tokyo Mew Mew, Pretty Cure, Madoka Magica, Sailor Moon, and Winx Club, and I love this one as well. It`s interesting how the theme of the warriors are based around virtues. It reminds me of my own Starlight Rain trilogy, where the magical girl warriors are based around the seasons, elements, and ancient Sumerian deities. Some words are misspelled, but it`s not a big deal.

    April 23, 2015 | Alexandria Francetic

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    Cool opening! Im actually interested to see what other interests Maria has. A girl who has a favorite super hero is always a good character to start with. It shows that her aspirations are above and beyond the norm. Im curiouse where Jon and the these super powers originated. I also would be interested to see you write a one shot Agent Jupiter chapter! If Sailor Moon is in any way an inspiration to you I must say, it really shows. Which is always good. Its a great Anime! Ill continue to read on. Keep it up.

    August 25, 2015 | Darien Sable