Sparkatale

you are really barreling through this. and yeah, i can world build. its both the benefit and the curse of a autistic mind: it never stops.

also, if i gave Sokuro's parents names to a gender, let me know cause, like i said, i forgot. their names are Inoute and Amosit. i honestly forgot which name is the dad's and which name is the mom's.

yeah.... it's a issue for me. i hopefully improved as it went on.

wow. my first honest critique. about time someone gave me one on this site outside of "this is good, keep it up." i even ask for them, but i keep getting platitudes. 

anyways, glad to see this has you excited. it's gonna be a wild ride, with a lot of twists and turns and a slow change from kid friendly to existnacial dread... i blame Wakfu for that.

but... i think i glossed over a few things. i did start writing this a couple years ago, when i wasn't so... mmm...... let's say intuned. i get better, but i tend to forget a few things i wrote down, like i acutally forgot Sokuro's parents. i have their names, but i don't remmeber whose name is the moms and whose the dad. those things tend to happen... a lot. 

yeah, i did not know that was a thing. *awkward laugh* the more you know...

and thanks for the review: you're the first one i've ever gotten on this site. 

yeah, i did not know that was a thing. *awkward laugh* the more you know...

and thanks for the review: you're the first one i've ever gotten on this site.