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Trading cute, flashy, awesome Fantasy stuff!

Holidays! Woooohh! Alright, I don't actually have a real Christmas break, but I can at least take some time off. And that means, more writing and reading! Hopefully! So, I've recently started writing a Fantasy story (my favorite genre at the moment) called 'What The Darkness Can't Consume'. I've managed to produce two chapters so far. It's about a girl named Cheria, in a world where people are born with so called Aër Centers - Aër being the essence of life. Some people have their Aër Center open which gives them the ability to learn how to control and manipulate Aër (similar to magic, but still very different). Cheria is sent to a special school in order to become an Aër user - an Artist. However, she has absolutely no talent for it. But why is she the only one who seems to lack the ability to control Aër, despite having an open Aër Center? So, basically what I'm looking for is another Fantasy work to read (preferably not a thousand chapters uploaded already =P). However, if my story does not seem appealing to you, do not even attempt to read it. Honestly, I'm not a big fan of trading comments and reviews because it feels like I would READ something only for the sake of getting something in RETURN. Of course, that's how it works here, but it still doesn't sit well with me. But I'll try to adapt, and I promise I will give my toootally hoooonest opinion! =)

by Terenas Stand | Dec 22nd 2013, 16:07


  • Merry Christmas =) You might like my story, but I wouldn't be surprised if you didn't. The girl character doesn't narrate until the second novel, until then it's told from the perspective of two boys. It is fantasy though. And yes, I really am a shark named Tiburon.

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    David Boyce | December 23, 2013


  • If you want to trade you might like my stories. Both of my stories take place in another world. The first couple of chapters in both take place in our world but I show two versions of the same scenario in them. After arriving in talamh (name of other world) the two main character's paths no longer intersect. Tell me if you are interested.

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    Heather O'toole /Davies | January 4, 2014


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