Sparkatale

This was.. oh my wow. I found out a long time ago that stories like these that are actually well written with a wide array of characters with all sorts of personalities are hard to come by. I like this though. Usually these types of stories start out when the world has already come to end, so to speak, but starting it as the end starts is much more interesting.

I am impressed.

This was... huh... interesting, to say the least. I just... wow. I don't know what else to say,

You didn't know I was a mystery nerd? You should see me when it comes to shows like Criminal Minds and Detective Conan<3 I remember this one time I was able to solve it before watchiing the rest of one of the movies and posted a comment on youtube about. Someone messaged back saying, "Yeah, well, no one cares what you think."

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Then later on, commented again, "...Oh, you were right."

Hah!

That's right! I can't help it if I'm a sucker for fluffy things and a good plot. Plots are the keys to my life, well, in my head they are anyway! Yeah, I only read them because you're my friend xD

So  I've just been sitting here, reading through this, and I have to say I enjoy it quite a bit. I love those gifted children type story lines. I can honestly say that I hope to read more!

Ya know, this is probably one of my favorites of your stories. Probably because I'm a huge mystery nerd.

... I am now and finally commenting, so ya know, yeah. You already know how I feel about your stories, so I don't really need to saying other than that others should read these too.

I would love to try and read this more, but the formatting kind of bugs me. I want to read it, it sounds like an interesting story but the formatting is all one long paragraph. I'm not trying to be mean, but I'm sure more would be willing to read it if the formatting was a bit different. Just a little, hopefully, helpful advice. I do wish to read it though, it's just hard to.