Crystal Bachleda | SparkaTale

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  • Joined 09/17/13
  • Last login 10/18/22
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Reviews
  • No Strings

    Rating:
    Wow...that was a bit scary but good...

    Reviewed on: April 21, 2017

  • Sky Dived

    Rating:
    Once again I am Reviewing my own work; anyone who reads A Woman's Adventure: First Draft will be wondering... Why did this writer use Crone? When I first wrote A Woman's Adventure; it did begin with Maiden, Mother and Crone...I decided to rewrite and post the first draft to see if anyone wants to compare the first draft with the current.

    Reviewed on: March 24, 2017

  • Legend of the golden Dragon

    Rating:
    That was beautiful and sad at the same time...

    Reviewed on: November 17, 2016

  • Alien Sunset

    Rating:
    That was a beautiful short story; keep rocking, rolling and writing...

    Reviewed on: June 29, 2016

  • An Angel With No Wings

    Rating:
    Guess I will leave a Review for my own work... This short story poem flows well and it can entrance anyone; it speaks to people and seems to have a hidden message. It is beautiful!!

    Reviewed on: May 4, 2016

  • Luna's Child

    Rating:
    I give this poem a Review Rate of FIVE STARS and I also give twenty hearts out of twenty... 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

    Reviewed on: April 10, 2016

Comments
  • Heathens

    Two chapters in; the story is interesting...

    Commented on: January 3, 2018

  • The Kaia Complex

    I like the beginning and hope to read more...

    Commented on: December 18, 2016

  • Blood Trail

    Read the first chapter and I will try to read more when I can...

    Commented on: November 17, 2016

  • Stories of a Once-Ordinary Girl

    First chapter of a first Original book; the Prologue is a Creation Myth and I hope it will be interesting...

    Commented on: November 17, 2016

  • Legends

    Read all five books of Legend; keep rocking, rolling and writing...

    Commented on: September 1, 2016

  • The Birth of the Goddess Dragon

    I just noticed the mistakes that I made and will fix them soon...

    Commented on: June 27, 2016

  • Deicide: To Kill a God

    Read Chapter 1 and I am curious to read more; will read more later...

    Commented on: April 14, 2016

  • Luna's Child

    I LOVE THIS

    Commented on: April 10, 2016

  • More Than Meets the Eye

    ​​Interesting first chapter; sorry about the bold Comment, I'm on a tablet...but I will red more when I can.

    Commented on: April 3, 2016

  • The Curse of the Black Blood

    I like this chapter and cannot wait to read more...I rate this chapter five happy faces out of ten... :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D

    Commented on: October 14, 2013

  • Neko's Tale

    I also post on FictionPress and Fanfiction.Net... On FictionPress; I was told to be careful about using gypsy and capitalizing Magic. I was also told to be careful that my character does not sound "overbearing". It's a fantasy journal; I am still trying to make it a bit believable but I have NEVER wrote a journal before. So this is new...I guess you and I are in the same boat...in a manner of speaking...

    Commented on: September 18, 2013

  • Neko's Tale

    I'm posting my story The Enchanted Journal of Terra Rose by phone. But instead of seperate paragraphs; it got combined into one. Until I can figure out how to access the regular site; the two chapters are stuck as they are. But I will be looking for good stories to read and Follow.

    Commented on: September 18, 2013

  • Neko's Tale

    I rate both chapters six happy faces out of ten... :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D Anymore coming?

    Commented on: September 18, 2013

  • The Enchanted Journal of Terra Rose

    I posted by phone; I cannot seem to find how to access the regular site. But I will try to fix it when I do... What do you think of the Prologue? I got a hand-drawn version of the cover but I could not put it up. A fellow author on Fanfiction.Net dolled up the copy of the handmade one I sent her, so I used that. Thank you for the critique and I will try to fix the chapters as soon as possible! :-D

    Commented on: September 18, 2013

  • The Keeper Chronicles: Hunt for the Blood Queen

    Thank you for the help... Um... Would you honor me with a comment to my story too?

    Commented on: September 18, 2013

  • The Keeper Chronicles: Hunt for the Blood Queen

    I read all six chapters and I LOVE this story; I want to read more... I wish there was a way ine could Favorite and Follow updating stories...

    Commented on: September 18, 2013