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Hello, I am new to SparkATale, and I'll just let my writing talk for me. I hope my writing pleases you all.
I, Stacey Luster, do solemnly swear to review all the stories I enjoy, regardless of the number of reviews, its age, or anything else.
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Rating:This book is awesome! A great read from start to finish.
Reviewed on: March 29, 2014
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Well, this one of my earlier works...so yeah it's different than from how I write now.
Consider reading Meeting Myself: http://sparkatale.com/books/details/3196#.VTKyr61VhBc
It's my most recent work and a much better work than this. This as well as the book that comes before it Anthony's New Son, are my first works that I ever did. So..yeah, it's gonna be rough. Thanks for the comment though.
Commented on: April 18, 2015
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NICE! This was awesome! AWESOME! You did a great job with this little piece! I LOVED IT!
Commented on: April 1, 2015
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Chapter 1
I LOVE your description of the inner child. That's what made me want to keep reading. I'm really loving this story.
I was shocked by the ending, but wow...this is a good work of art.
Commented on: March 28, 2015
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Chapter 1
Very good beginning. Very good indeed. I liked how you started it off as though an old man was telling it then jumped into the past with a flashback and back to the present so fluidly. Great job.
Commented on: November 23, 2014
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Chapter 1
A wonderful start. I'm loving this story. It's dark and I don't like how the Gifted just still people from their homes because they're different...that's wrong and I do hope they're overthrown!Commented on: November 13, 2014
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Chapter 46
Okay, and overall dark book, but engaging throughout. I loved it even though it was the darkest thing I ever read. You made me laugh, cry, and scream with rage at multiple points throughout and I thank you, this book was the best fiction piece I've read.
Great job sir! AWESOME STORY! VERY VERY AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens after this. Will there be a sequel?
Commented on: June 21, 2014
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Chapter 43
Okay...this just got interesting. I wonder what's going to happen now *turns the page*....
Commented on: June 20, 2014
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Chapter 40
Okay, Carriers that aren't even 10? COME ON! What's up with that? you sir...WHAT THE HECK MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Commented on: June 20, 2014
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Chapter 39
My God, Shay's going insane! SHE'S GOING INSANE and I don't know if she's going to survive in the end. Shoot, I don't know if any of them will be alive in the end. Man, I can't believe this!
Commented on: June 20, 2014
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Chapter 35
You sir, are...OMG! The imagery, the death, the killing, the one by one extermination...REALLY? Good story, but my God is it sick! You've evoked my emotions...good job!
Commented on: June 20, 2014
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Chapter 30
A funny chapter, still a great story and I can't wait for more from you. These kids can never catch a break though, can they?
Commented on: June 20, 2014
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Chapter 27
Good scene, I hope their cockiness has ended and no one else will die. I hated the fact that some of them died and how ruthless the government is. I hate that part, but I hope that everyone will still continue onward.
Commented on: June 17, 2014
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Chapter 26
Another fight scence, another wondrous destruction of those that oppose the Carriers. May the Carriers forever prosper!!!!!
I hope this story has an awesome sequel.... Nonetheless, I LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
Commented on: June 17, 2014
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Chapter 24
Darkness, vivid imagery, fluxuationary circumstances and personalities....MY GOD, YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! THIS IS JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!!
Commented on: June 17, 2014
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Chapter 23
Another perfect chapter. Well, death aside, a heartwarming end at least. I hope Shay and Carson at least make it out alive. I could never be in their situation and not break into one million pieces.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 22
THIS-BOOK-IS-AWESOME!
You sir, are a very good writer. I applaud your skills.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 21
CRAP! CRAP! CRAP! I DON'T BELIEVE THIS! THIS CANT BE HAPPENING? WHAT THE HECK? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY'D THEY HAVE TO......
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 20
Cops...cops...and more bloody COPS! These cops and agents are everywhere aren't they? Makes for good battle scenes though.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 19
Wow....it would seem that for these nine, trouble seems to follow them everywhere they go.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 19
DREAMS.....dreams....how vivid are her dreams? Man, I can't imagine going through the pain Shay has undergone. I weep for her, I weep for her so much.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 18
AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! This is just plain AWESOME! I must say, your writing is grand and I can't wait to see what I find next.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 17
Awesome! Another wondrous chapter, my friend. You had my curousity, now have my attention.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 16
Awesome! This keeps getting better and better and better. I'm never gonna stop reading this!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Again, thank you. I'm glad that you're loving this. Much appreciated.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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I'm glad you're emotions have been shown. Now, concerning the homeschooling, you're probably right, but...well I shant say more for fear of spoiling it. Read onward my friend.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Well I can't wait to see the rest. If you could send me the entire story as a PDF so I can read it in its entirety since I'm not always at home with internet access. Yet, I always have some form of computer at my side
I'd love that.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 15
AWESOME! KEEP UP THE SUSPENSE! KEEP IT UP! LOVING THIS!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 13
The vividness of your writing intrigues me. I hope you write more books like this.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 13
Okay......one thing: IT'S AWESOME! That's all I can say. Everyone manages to remain hopeful, partially, despite these harrowing circumstances.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 12
Well....more trouble....I hope they manage to leave to leave the state and these annoying cops.
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 11
KEEP THE AWESOMENESS OF WORDS AFLOWING! LOVE IT! THE PLOT! THE PLOT! IT THICKENS! IT THICKENS!!!!!!!!!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 10
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! I LOVE THIS STORY! IT KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 9
Another awesome chapter! It's either them or us mentality, fitting for the situation. Great work! Great work!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Chapter 8
I'm like HOLY CRAP! I didn't know Shay had it in her! You go girl!!!!!!!!! You're really pulling me in here. I can't believe she did that!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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LOVE IT! Despite their situation, they attempt to remain strong. You're invoking my emotions...INVOKING THEM!
Commented on: June 16, 2014
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Well, keep up the good work. You're writing is quite intriguing!
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 6
This is getting good. Really good. Your work is excellent!
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 5
Another AWESOME CHAPTER! AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! I'm LOVING THIS STORY!
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 4
Another AWESOME CHAPTER! I was on the edge of my seat over here! This is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 3
This is awesome! The action, the intensity, this is very good work you've got going on here.
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 1
Okay, the synopsis had my curosity. Now that I'm reading, you have my attention. Definitely going to read onward! Like the way you went into the story. Very intriguing.
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 2
Another awesome chapter. One thing though you mention father. Is this person a religious leader? If so father should be capitalized. Ex. Father Cornello (from Fullmetal Alchemist) However, if said 'father' is a parental figure this is a non-action. Other than that, you're doing good. Keep it up.
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Chapter 1
A wondrous start. Well interesting to say the least. I'm intrigued and I like it. I found some grammar errrors, but nonetheless, this is a good start. I realized straightaway the moment Sayian was uttered that it was a Dragon Ball Z thing going...one of my favorites shows. Nonetheless, I hope you continue with this.
Commented on: June 15, 2014
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Jade Lotus Book One: Dandelion Princess
Chapter One
I loved it! The first couple paragraphs delve right into not only the character and tell about her, but also her surroundings in a simultaneous node of vision. I like Junseh already. I can relate to her quite well since I know someone who’s almost like her, maybe a clone? I don’t know. I like her though.
Commented on: May 16, 2014
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I've revised this chapter. This chapter is completely different than the previous submission.
Commented on: April 25, 2014
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I've revised this chapter. This chapter is completely different than the previous submission.
Commented on: April 25, 2014
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Yeah, that has been fixed. This chapter's outcome is a wee bit different now.
Commented on: April 21, 2014
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Chapter 74:
A beautiful chapter! I'm loving this book! I can't believe all that has happened in this expanse of time! You're awesome, Malgorzata!
Commented on: April 6, 2014
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Chapter 72:
This was another exciting chapter. Loved it, but um....I guess there are Lasmarians (probably didn't spell that right) everywhere huh?
Commented on: April 6, 2014
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Chapter 71:
This was enticing and captivating. I can't believe this! I can't to see what happens next. I can't believe that happened to..to..I just can't believe this happened!
Commented on: April 5, 2014
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Chapter 68
A wonderful chapter! Loved it! Only one thing: WHAT THE HECK IS GONNA HAPPEN TO THEM NOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! They were soooo close. And where's Erik? I hope the little guy's okay. I'm so worried right now that Hurricane Emotions is spinning off the coast of my mind, ready to make landfall and wreak havoc on my cereberal cortex!
Commented on: April 4, 2014
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Chapter 62:
I'm still loving this book. I can't wait to read more.
Commented on: March 26, 2014
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The Checkpoint
A very good chapter, I saw a few grammer errors, but good nonetheless.
Commented on: October 28, 2013
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Chapter Spirited away
I'm loving this story. Sorry I haven't commented on the other chapters prior, it's jsut so captivating and good. I LOVE IT!
Commented on: October 26, 2013
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Chapter 6
Another well written chapter. I see no grammer errors, but I'm loving how the story is progressing.
Commented on: October 20, 2013
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Chapter 5
This chapter is quite interesting. Your sheading light on how this castle differs from castles in modern day textbooks is quite intriguing. I wonder what happened to the real "lady" of this land?
Commented on: October 20, 2013
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Chapter 3
Wow, now you've really caught me. I love this story! I would love it if you continued to critique "A New Type of Block" for me. I need your aide.
Commented on: October 19, 2013
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Chapter 2
Again, another good chapter. One thing though, I got confused at the beginning, but by the end I was at the edge of my seat. I can already tell this will be a good story.
Commented on: October 18, 2013
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Chapter 1 - The Prolouge
I loved the beginning! I loved it! I really like science fiction and this I know will keep my interest. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're good.
Commented on: October 18, 2013
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Chapter 1 to Malgorzata Wyrwas
I am glad for your critique of "A New Kind of Block" and I would appreciate it if you would continue that feedback on this and my other stories as well.
I am glad for your critique of "A New Kind of Block" and I would appreciate it if you would continue that feedback on this and my other stories as well. I survive on through critiques like yours.
Commented on: October 18, 2013
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Thank you for your critique on chapter 1. Yeah, this probably isn't my best work. I would recommend you read "Anthony's New Son". It is written better and I believe it might suite you better. Sorry if this one wasn't to your liking.
Commented on: October 18, 2013
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This first chapter captivated me in the first paragraph. I just know I'm going to love this story.
Commented on: October 16, 2013
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Concerning chapter one of your story, you've captivated me. I love science fiction stories and this is awesome!
Commented on: September 18, 2013