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Trading a lot of chapters
I'm looking for someone who'd be willing to review each chapter of my book Mystic Mirror (35 chapters and growing). Of course I'm willing to return the favor. I'm not a native English speaker so I won't be giving any tips on grammar and spelling, but I'll do the critique on everything else thoroughly and honestly. Mystic Mirror is a fantasy story about a girl lost in a fantasy world. There will be wars, a demon who'll want to commit genocide and intrigues. I'd like to review a book od any genre except for a harlequin-style romance. What say you? (Yeah, I know I'm quoting Lord of The Rings).
by Malgorzata Wyrwas | Oct 8th 2013, 06:57
Sure, I'll do a full story critique. :) Would you mine doing the same on my story Wingless Bird? It only has 8 chapters at the moment, but if my plans come true, it should be about 40 chapters when finished. It's about two friends who meet a mysterious thief named Jason. He brings them into acknowledgement that their lives have more danger and secrets within them than they had known before. I'll leave a comment on your story right now, though, I'll tell you now that it might get a little long.
ReplyHope J.D. | October 9, 2013
I took a look at your story (skimmed over the prologue) and I'm up for the trade. I'll leave a propper review tomorrow (it's night here now).
ReplyMalgorzata Wyrwas | October 9, 2013
Hey, I'm sorry about not reviewing recently. I haven't had much time on the computer, and now I hurt my neck so badly I'm surprised I'm even sitting up right now and typing this to you. I promise to write you another critique before the week is up - because I don't think my neck will hurt for very long, hopefully. Also, thank you for the two critiques on my story. I've never had anyone comment on my hooks before, so it was nice to know that it wasn't a very strong one. Thank you. I hope my critiques can help you out once I get around to them. :)
ReplyHope J.D. | October 13, 2013
Actually, I decided to force myself to read a chapter because I feel so bad for taking so long. ^^' But I think it's all I'm going to be doing today, because of my neck. Sorry about that.
ReplyHope J.D. | October 13, 2013
I'd be happy to give a fully story critique once all the chapters are posted! I'll comment on the chapters you have posted now. If you wouldn't mind doing the same on my story that would be great. I only have nine chapters posted right now, but I've written 41 on fictionpress and am currently rewriting a great deal of the earlier chapters. I'll do my best to give you detailed comments on every chapter. (:
ReplyA . Nonymous | October 9, 2013
A. Nonymous, sorry for answering so late. Of course, I'll review your book. Anyone else up for the trade?
ReplyMalgorzata Wyrwas | October 13, 2013
I wouldn't mind trading reviews so long as you're okay with reading my work.
ReplyNicholas Lie | October 19, 2013
Reviewed.
ReplyMalgorzata Wyrwas | October 20, 2013
I'm still willing to review your chapters in exchange for commenting on mine, especially if you have 10 or more chapters to trade.
ReplyMalgorzata Wyrwas | October 20, 2013
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