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Stardewy Valley Shorts and Prompts by MissKatrina Lynne In Progress

Updated: May 3, 2018 | Published: May 3, 2018 | Reviews: 0


Chasing Skies by MissKatrina Lynne In Progress
At sixteen years old, Sky was feeling the fresh wounds from her recent break-up with her high school love. To make matters worse, he was now dating her ex best friend. She didn't think her life could get any worse, so it came as no surprise to her when she found comfort in an older friend who had always been there for her. But when things between them go further than she ever imagined, Sky finds herself a new world of pain, torn between right and wrong and her new feelings of love. This is her story.

Updated: May 3, 2018 | Published: May 3, 2018 | Reviews: 0


Shinda Yō Ni Suru Ni Wa (To Be Dead) by Michael Mann In Progress
Inoue Yuki's best friend Kurosawa Mariko's family and self have been slaughtered by some merc for hire. Yuki was blinded in the process of protecting her friend. 12 years later Things start to get weird and everyone she knows Is dieing. If something isn't done in time, Everyone in the world could end up dead. Please critique. If it seems like the plot is driving Yuki and not visa versa, then mission accomplished, that's what I was going for. This is just the first draft, things may change in the second draft.

Updated: January 29, 2015 | Published: January 15, 2015 | Reviews: 2


Into The Dark by Michael Mann In Progress
The young Kyle Lane is kidnapped and forced to play in a game, where the only rule is kill your opponent before time runs out. PLEASE CRITIQUE.

Updated: February 4, 2015 | Published: January 23, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Crisis Averted by Michael Mann In Progress
1000 Years after the Earth has been targeted by a laser called Earth Buster, A new threat appears, The Juric Impact System, a collection of Kinetic Bombardment Rods, has been targeted at Earth. It is up to Joshua Collin to stop this menace. Please Critique

Updated: January 30, 2015 | Published: January 30, 2015 | Reviews: 0


X by Michael Mann Completed
A young man and Murderer was kidnapped and thrown into a forest with Nine other people. He must work together with these people to escape this nightmare of a forest. Please Critique

Updated: February 22, 2015 | Published: January 30, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Don't Look by Michael Mann In Progress
Anna, A little girl who was born into a research center, is put under many tests designed to heighten A human's senses, turns her into a killing machine. Dr. Harison must find a way to stop this girl from killing everyone in this world.

Updated: February 4, 2015 | Published: February 4, 2015 | Reviews: 0


The Michael Mann Story Timeline List by Michael Mann In Progress
This is the timeline for my stories so far. Enjoy.

Updated: February 14, 2015 | Published: February 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Sky Night Lights by Michael Mann In Progress
I usually don't like this kind of stuff (Romance) But I got the Idea and Decided, Why Not!? This story is inspired by the song Fireflies. This Might end up as a Novella, but I'm not sure. Now for the actual Description. A Young Girl named Sweet Davenport wants to go to the sixth annual firefly watching festival, She wants to ask the boy she has a crush on to go to the thing with her. But things don't go as well as she wanted them to.

Updated: February 17, 2015 | Published: February 11, 2015 | Reviews: 1


Alphabet Hunter by Michael Mann In Progress
Zachary Djre is chosen to be the successor to the organization, The Alphabet, when he was young. Ever since then, he's been looking for the man that killed everyone that he knew to get his revenge. he soon finds out that in order to even see this man again, he must kill every member of The Alphabet before getting to this man. Zachary must prove that he has what it takes to take on this man, and avenge his fallen comrades. PLEASE CRITIQUE.

Updated: February 25, 2015 | Published: February 12, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Fighters Spirit by James Light by Michael Mann Completed
FIGHTER'S SPIRIT IS CANCELED BECAUSE JAMES GOT THE CRAP SUED OUT OF HIM! this is a story my friend James Light is writing. He asked me to put it up on this site for him, because he doesn't have an account and doesn't feel like making one. It is fan made and are four parts. The Star Wars part, The Yugioh Part, the Dragon Ball Z part, and the Demon Chronicles. Star Wars is owned by Disney, Yugioh is owned by Konami, Dragon Ball Z is owned by a bunch of people, and Demon Chronicles is owned by me, Michael Mann. James is the main character, and Even I'm a character in this. I'm probably the funniest character in it even. If you think the story is stupid, then congratulations, even James thinks it's stupid. but it's funny. Enjoy, and give feedback. I will relay all feedback to James.

Updated: July 28, 2015 | Published: February 25, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Rechardé by Michael Mann In Progress
A Vampire named Luna is targeted by a many people. they either want to kill her or capture her, either way, nothing good is happening, but she still tries to live a normal life with her friends. Warning, This story contains some violence, foul language, and sexual themes, viewer discretion advised, you have been warned.

Updated: June 25, 2015 | Published: March 5, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Fabric of Fate by Michael Mann In Progress

Updated: March 22, 2015 | Published: March 22, 2015 | Reviews: 0


X by Michael Mann Completed
This story is a remake of the first X. It was full of mistakes and this one is just ... TEN times better HAHAHAHA.... Because the title of the story is ten.... anyways. This story is about a girl named Jewel (in the original it was about Levi, but don't worry, he's still in this story) And she's kidnapped and thrown into a forest and is forced to do puzzles to escape.

Updated: July 29, 2015 | Published: June 24, 2015 | Reviews: 1


The Walking Dead by Michael Mann In Progress
This is a Fan made story of The Walking Dead, it is in no way canon, but it is written as if it were canon with the comics and the video game. This story follows the character David as he struggles through the walker outbreak with the rest of his group.

Updated: July 9, 2015 | Published: June 25, 2015 | Reviews: 0


The Wrong Crowd by Michael Mann In Progress
Eva Hawkins is a girl who likes to hang out with the punks of her school. A new kid has come to school which is starting to stir up trouble with her and her ex boyfriend. This story is inspired by this by the animated short. Luigi's Day Out.

Updated: July 10, 2015 | Published: July 8, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Pokemon Omega Ruby by Michael Mann In Progress
Attention, I do not own pokemon or most of the characters shown, however I do own some characters. anyone reading this is assumed to be a fan of pokemon and by extension, is expected to know what each pokemon looks like, thus, I will not be going into any detail for most pokemon with a few exceptions, The characters Michael, Madison, and James, are also all real people who happen to be my friends. except for Michael, because I'm Michael.

Updated: October 27, 2015 | Published: October 22, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Peaceful Souls by Michael Mann Completed
Bonnie was a normal young girl, but when she turns Nine years old, Her life changes for the worse. A short story by Michael Mann

Updated: March 20, 2016 | Published: March 20, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Light Up My Sky by diane sky Completed
He didn't know her name, or where she came from or what her life was like. He knew but two things about her – she held the sky captive in her eyes, and he loved her hopelessly, deeply, endlessly. "I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. (I think I made you up inside my head.)" -Sylvia Plath

Updated: March 16, 2016 | Published: December 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Smoke and Mirrors by diane sky Completed
It is a time of dragons scorching the sky line. In Thebbington Abbey, Ember Blackthorne earns her living as a thief. When she crosses paths with both a humble, kind jeweler's son and a wicked, irresistible pirate, she learns that the world often catches fire and legends often beat reality.

Updated: September 30, 2016 | Published: March 23, 2016 | Reviews: 1


Poison and Wine by diane sky Completed
It started on a 4th of July. It ended on a 4th of July. And in between the two of them, I allowed Paul to captivate me like a firework show. I recognized the poison on his lips and I still choked on it. And he sipped on the fire in my veins like a fine wine.

Updated: July 25, 2017 | Published: October 24, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Seven devils by diane sky In Progress
The world has reached the point beyond redemption. Again. From beneath the crust of the earth are awoken the seven deadly sins, coming to ensure humanity's perdition. A great war between sin and virtue. A civil war within a single man, meant to either doom or save his kin. And the greatest sin of all, crawling under his skin. Murder.

Updated: October 5, 2017 | Published: August 2, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Clanager by Ernie Lionsden Completed
When you turn sixteen. You life could possibly change. I mean, you could just go to school as normal OR you could wake up on the moon with a tattoo. Now if you happen to find yourself on the moon with a tattoo, this means you are a clanager: a powerful shapeshifter wizard. They run the world and keep it working with magic. Now Darcy has to save her boyfriend or her bestfriend.

Updated: December 10, 2015 | Published: December 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Half Pipes by Ernie Lionsden In Progress
Phoenix and her mum are in a world of debt. Phoenix gives her job to her mum and goes looking for another one, a long with another way to travel. She discovers skateboarding and with the help of her friends, she becomes the towns first skater chick. Along the way, she goes through some though times but also finds herself in love. She struggles to keep her life in balance and turns to her new hobby for answers.

Updated: January 17, 2016 | Published: January 4, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Because I love you by Aaron L. In Progress
Xaphile wasn't exactly your average boy-next-door. Grumpy, clumsy, and highly antisocial - he was the complete opposite of his girlfriend, a bubbly nerd named Ella. But like Yin and Yang, the two of them were inseparable... at least, until the day Ella died. Blinded by grief, Phil took his own life. They would have ended up as another Romeo and Juliet if fate hadn't had other plans for them. Instead of finding his much-expected peace in the afterlife, Phil somehow awakens in a parallel world called Atlas as a different version of himself. Trapped in the kingdom of Aerika, a bizarre place chock full of things like elves, orcs, demons, sprites, and everything else under the sun, Phil finds himself very confused and depressed. He would have attempted to kill himself again if he hadn't been captured and caged by a ruthless girl who looks and sounds exactly like his late girlfriend. Is this his own, personal hell? Or is it a second chance? And if it is a second chance... does he even want to take it? Copyright © by Aaron Ledgers. All rights reserved

Updated: December 4, 2016 | Published: April 26, 2016 | Reviews: 0