Status: Completed
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Created: September 10, 2013 | Updated: September 11, 2013
Genre : Romance
Language : English
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| 1: | Danger Zone | 70 |
| 2: | Fallen | 166 |
| 3: | Always You | 263 |
| 4: | Somehow I'll Make It Through | 643 |
| 5: | Please Just Leave Me | 390 |
| 6: | Finally | 134 |
| 7: | Missing | 479 |
| 8: | Painful Ignorance | 67 |
| 9: | Thursday | 229 |
| 10: | Nameless | 152 |
| 11: | Crushed Statice and Hydrangeas | 586 |
| 12: | Sleeping Beauties | 75 |
| 13: | Aishiteru | 71 |
| 14: | Let's Just Try | 322 |
| 15: | Alone | 199 |
| 16: | They Don't Get Together In The End | 67 |
| 17: | Broken Pieces | 360 |
| 18: | Effects | 296 |
| 19: | One-Time | 290 |
| 20: | The Romance of Cia | 317 |
| 21: | Longing Lingers | 256 |
| 22: | Commencement | 104 |
| Total Wordcount: | 5536 |
Reviews (1)
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Although I am not a poetry fan, Alicia Rightmyer's collection of poems was a good read. Most of the poems are of a darker nature during the uncertainty of a relationship or one that's on the brink of falling apart, but she does a nice job of adding in contemporary aspects like technologies role in romance. It was that piece for me that made it a far more interesting read than just angst breakup poetry and moved this rating from a three star to a four.
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October 8, 2013 Flag
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I'll be giving you a full review, but I really enjoyed some of these. Especially Painful Ignorance. That one I have lots of experience with ;) One thing I would say is perhaps do another piece or add a few of happy romances? That's just me wanting some sort of happy ending after a lot of angst, drama, and dark emotions that you write about. I would like to see what you do with a romance in the blissful parts of the relationship and then in the more comfortable stages. I think it would be a good read at least!
October 8, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
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I would move the note to the end of this. I think it would just fit better there for readers who read from start to finish. It would feel more natural.
October 8, 2013 | D.M. Gergen