Of Love and Heartbreak, a Romance story | SparkaTale

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Of Love and Heartbreak

By: Alicia Rightmyer

Status: Completed

Summary:

Love: the most consuming thing that can happen to a teenager. Organized as a collection of poems, this book is an adolescent story of love and inevitable heartbreak.

Created: September 10, 2013 | Updated: September 11, 2013

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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  • D.M. Gergen

    Although I am not a poetry fan, Alicia Rightmyer's collection of poems was a good read. Most of the poems are of a darker nature during the uncertainty of a relationship or one that's on the brink of falling apart, but she does a nice job of adding in contemporary aspects like technologies role in romance. It was that piece for me that made it a far more interesting read than just angst breakup poetry and moved this rating from a three star to a four.

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    I'll be giving you a full review, but I really enjoyed some of these.  Especially Painful Ignorance.  That one I have lots of experience with ;)  One thing I would say is perhaps do another piece or add a few of happy romances?  That's just me wanting some sort of happy ending after a lot of angst, drama, and dark emotions that you write about.  I would like to see what you do with a romance in the blissful parts of the relationship and then in the more comfortable stages.  I think it would be a good read at least!

    October 8, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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    I would move the note to the end of this.  I think it would just fit better there for readers who read from start to finish.  It would feel more natural.

    October 8, 2013 | D.M. Gergen