Status: In Progress
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Created: September 10, 2013 | Updated: September 10, 2013
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
Reviews: 0 | Rating:
Favorites: 2
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| 1: | run, hide, slay and survive | 139 |
| 2: | chaos descending | 1850 |
| 3: | Chaos Descended | 3191 |
| Total Wordcount: | 5180 |
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Interesting idea! I like the story so far ^^ Your sentence structure is sometimes a little off though, which distracts from the flow of the story. But other than that I think it's great so far! :DSeptember 10, 2013 | Genevieve Middleton
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I like your story a lot so far. I cant wait to see what you post next!
November 16, 2013 | Heather O'toole /Davies
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Nice intro. Don't capitalize the T in The for the normal days. I"ll give you a more thorough review once I've finished what you've posted.September 10, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
