Status: Completed
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Created: April 1, 2015 | Updated: February 22, 2016
Genre : Science Fiction
Language : English
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NICE! This was awesome! AWESOME! You did a great job with this little piece! I LOVED IT!
April 1, 2015 | Stacey Luster
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This is actually quite interesting, although it is short. It also seems to be self-autobiographical, based around the life of the author. It`s like your character is living as a child in his dream, but still has the mind of an adult. It makes me think about what I`ll think of my past years from now.
May 7, 2015 | Alexandria Francetic
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I love your time travel stories. I sometimes feel nostalgic myself, going back to my roots, remembering events that occurred. Would be good to go back and try and make a difference for the future.
Reminds me of a combination of "Big," and "Back To The Future."
Loved it, very adventurous!!
May 10, 2015 | Cardiff 1984
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Great idea indeed. I think it would be weird to experience something like this, from both points of view, Neil's and his friends/parents. Nice job on this one.
April 1, 2015 | Leah Soto
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Pretty good for a short story. Was this your story made or have you had more practice?
May 8, 2015 | Mary M. Price
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Thank you Mary! This was not my first story, I wrote it about two years ago. It's probably somewhere near my fiftieth story, so I've had a bit of practice.
May 8, 2015 | Ryan Funk
