Sparkatale

Incredible! Just Incredible!

I loved every experience, emotion and intensity during the story. It sent chills right down my spine.

You must have studied Zombie legends a lot, by the way you described the myth and also in Brooks eyes.

I enjoyed the one on one talks with Brooks, Crawford and the Boss, the banter, the disagreements.

In the end, it appears Brooks was either being brave or getting too cocky, by going up against Boko, either way it was a bad idea.

Great read, can't wait for more!

Wow, an exciting, gripping and spine chilling story. Just think a woodland, that not only makes it's experience a persons worst nightmare, but it's also a Time Warp.

I loved every exact detail of each characters experience, it had me on edge, wondering if the troops would escape and what the secret of the woods were.

Also like the ending mystery of what happened to the other campers? Did they escape? Or did they possibly end up in another time zone?

Great work Ryan!!

Wow, really exciting developments. I wonder what will come of Stephenson and Michael? Could the Silver worms be harmful to the infected. I hope Michael doesn't suffer the same fate as the previous subject.

Look forward to your next updates.

Enjoy reading UFO stories. Surprised the case seemed certainly closed, even after the three consecutive reports. Sounds like the police couldn't be bothered and were more interested in a football game.

Look forward to more stories. Well done.

Enjoying the prolonged suspense, of what happened to Michael. It must be really serious for Stephenson to keep Michael in the Lab. I wonder if there is a massive twist somewhere in the story? Look forward to next updates.

Bachmeir was very cunning and manipulative in the whole plot. He covered his tracks really well, by creating the beast inside the would be hero, only for Heinrich's werewolf to be passed off as the murderer. Now, the town is free forever, Bachmeir can start his attacks elsewhere.

The story sent shivers down my spine, with excitement and fear at the same time. I enjoyed the intensity and the horror. Reminded me of 'An American Werewolf In London.'

I really enjoyed it. Your writing technic is World Class. Very well done.

On Chapter 4 so far. Can't wait to find out the mystery of the two children.

It looks like the demonic clown story was the curse that brought Kurt and his families passing. It seems both Clown and Kurt were tested. Kurt was in self doubt of what was reality and not, which brought fear to terror. The clown who was already dead, was a sinner and seeking forgiveness. That's my theory.

I like how you bring twists in the conclusions of your stories. Excellent.

I love your time travel stories. I sometimes feel nostalgic myself, going back to my roots, remembering events that occurred. Would be good to go back and try and make a difference for the future.

Reminds me of a combination of "Big," and "Back To The Future."

Loved it, very adventurous!!

Incredibly, intense, terrifying and chilling story. A Daunting, entrapped and cursed experience for Martha especially. It looks like Martha and David are going to be stalked by this painting to the end, with no explanation of the true story behind the painting. I'm glad David survived.

Again very well detailed and I love how you keep the reader in suspense, almost as if the reader is there. Excellent!!

A Brilliant psychological story and a very well written twist at the end. I was in suspense to the end. If only Hart didn't get his memory back. If only the soldier never laid eyes on him. 

From a box of chocolates to sour grapes, is what Conrad Justice experienced. Did his curiosity cause his marriage, his job, his sanity, to leave a safe haven?

Emotional, Suspenseful and thrilling story. The twist at the end was so powerful. I like how you left us to wonder if there was a curse at the end, or if Conrad did kill himself.

Another great story.

Just read the whole story. Wow, how could both Jan and Jon not see the Supernatural changes they experienced. It's amazing how much 50 years can change with Society and it way's of living and the history. I love how you touched on some of events between 50's and 2000's. Your description on feeling and appearance was awesome. I enjoyed this time travel adventure between husband and wife. Look forward to more of your stories.

Awesome story. A lot of suspense and it took some courage for Brandon to own up to his tragic mistake years earlier, but it looks like he past came back to haunt him with a vengeance. Your writing was techincally very good and you added a lot descriptive experience involving Brandon. Loved it.