Sparkatale

I enjoyed the different take on the 'little green men' that come to mind when aliens are menioned. It was nicely humourous, and the way you made Glorck so...human...made it easy to identify with. He had job pressures, a girlfriend, and was implusive, just like many of us. This amde it very easy to slip into the story.

However, I felt the ending was a little rushed; the way Yax's friend swooped in to 'save the day' was a little too easy a plot device.

Overall, I found the story humourous and quite enjoyable. 

Cheers.