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Hello, my name is Conor, your average 17 year old male. I hail from Ireland, long live the Emerald Isle!!! I have so many stories in my head they need to let themselves out some way, so I shall post here. I hope you enjoy!
Stories In-Progress: 1
Currently Writing: 1 (Fantasie Impromptu)
Favourite Quotes:
"The heart may be weak, and sometimes, it may even give in. But inside, there's a light that never goes out!" - Sora (Kingdom Hearts)
"But...Who will I have ice-cream with!?" - Roxas (Kingdom Hearts)
"The moment man devoured the fruit of knowledge, he sealed his fate...
Entrusting his future to the cards, man clings to a dim hope.
Yet, the Arcana is the means by which all is revealed...
Beyond the beaten path lies the absolute end.
It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx Avatar (Persona 3)
"When I'm with a boy I like, it's hard for me to say anything cool, or-or witty, or at all. I-I can usually make a few vowel sounds, and then I have to go away." - Willow (Buffy the Vampire Slayer)
"The internet is like one big universe of poured in mind." - MD (Close friend)
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best." - Marilyn Monroe
"What a person needs is not a brilliant mind that speaks, but a special heart that listens." - Anonymous
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Rating:Short, sweet and beautifully written. The words flowed naturally and the detail was perfect. Really enjoyed it. No errors in spelling or grammar.
Reviewed on: September 14, 2013
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Rating:Story: Short and sweet, It was good, and the first paragraph had a definite hook to it that kept me reading. But by the end I was a little confused. What exactly had happened? I'm still not too sure. Grammar and Punctuation: Minor spelling mistakes, but nothing major. Writing good for most of it, but a noticeable dip in quality near the end. The sentences just didn't flow well, and repetition of the word fire was apparent. Still enjoyable though. Verdict: 3/5. Good idea and enjoyable, but a bit confusion and repetitive near the end.
Reviewed on: September 14, 2013
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I'm not describing Deven intentionally so that people can imagine for themselves what he looks like. :) Thanks for the feedback.
Commented on: September 14, 2013