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Hello. I'd really love to get some comments/critiques for my story The False God. I plan on doing a lot more with it and I'd like to know what others feel about it before continuing. If you require a trade, I would be more than willing. But I won't guarantee reading more than one chapter. If I enjoy your story, I will gladly continue reading, just as I hope you will do with mine c;

by Jessica Jankowski | Oct 14th 2013, 15:52


  • Hello, I'll gladly take a look on the first chapter of your story, but in return I'll require you to review Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 in return - my prologue is extremely short and the both chapters combined are 4164 words long, so it would be fair considering how long your first chapter is. So, are you up for the trade?

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    Malgorzata Wyrwas | October 18, 2013


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