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by MissKatrina Lynne | Jan 1st 2015, 18:45


  • Okay, I have 2 stories. One is new, one I'm still working on.

    I would Appreciate any advice or comments anyone could give me :)
    First there's:

    Ashes and Gold. 1 chapter so far  (here's the summary)

    After Ashton's mother died when he was seven his whole world turned upside down. He never expected that a girl in Pink Converse Tennis shoes would turn his world around... and make it all the better

    Then:

    Callie Cameron - Country Chaos. It's actually book 5 in the series... don't know why I'm working on them in mixed up orders :D

    15 chapters so far : (Here's the Summary)

    The Martin family takes a trip out to the country to visit their extended family and help them move to their new home. But it doesn't take long for Lilly Ann to figure out that there's something not quite right going on... starting with the masked figure who calls himself the Shadow Rider.


    And as a fair warning, there are ALOT of typos. I don't have much time to write, let along proofread so... sorry about that!

    Laterz!

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    Keely Kelly | January 2, 2015


  • I'd love to return a review in exchange for some eyes on "Drax & Mag: UnFamiliars". Two chapters in it so far. 

    Description:

    Azadraxiel is a minor familiar demon that rather likes the earth. The Weirder who had summoned and bound her, one Bridget Cleary, was murdered by her husband when he discovered her practices, and instead of returning to Hell on the completion of Bridget's Contract, Azadraxiel, stole the body of her former master as her Ark (she'd been using a goat before) and lived on for hundreds of years as Bridget, on the Infernal Equivalent of an expired passport. She posed as progressively further removed descendants of the real Bridget the Burned, and practiced as a demonologist and Weirder, working under the nose of the Red Order--once known as the Inquisition. Using a loophole in the standard Contract of binding Familiars to their masters, she works to summon her sister, Magraxiel, to the mortal coil. 
    ow, the aether is buzzing with news. 
    News of something big about to happen. 
    Something Biblical. 
    Something using words like "Ark" and "Covenant". 
    ...And "Final".

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    Abbi Normal | January 3, 2015