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Dibs! A Theory Finale

By: Millennium Productions

Status: Completed

Summary:

The Widows were created from myth to Phase's adopters. The story is now centered around Dibs, a victim of Phase's Demographic and her powerful theory associated with the Paradox, still believed to be breathing and aided by active myths. Go figure. A fading theory set in 2004-2005, series finale.

Created: August 25, 2016 | Updated: November 1, 2017

Genre : Suspense

Language : English

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      This is my final work in writing I plan to make as short as I can. I intended to publish Theory Finale at the beginning of September, but I want to be able to look back on my work as soon as possible.

      Hope you enjoy.

      August 25, 2016 | Millennium Productions


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      I apologize if some of the scenes and ideas are unnecessary. The Series Finale is suppose to be Phase's paradise. Also, the adult content really fit my characters as females in music videos were just as honest adult contented during the 2000s.

      September 29, 2016 | Millennium Productions


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      It was a nice run. My inspiration, creativity juice is gone and I'm happy. May still edit some bits from time to time depending on how much I think of the story.

      To my audience, Thank you.

      November 10, 2016 | Millennium Productions


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      Alright. Dibs! A Theory Finale really has a lack of meaning compared to No Awakening and No Sequence, that I consider masterpieces. I need to clear this up for any confused viewers. The plot of the 2004-2005 series is based around Dibs fascination by Phase. Phase is eventually revived by the Widows that survive based around the length of Dibs intimacy that cured his prosthetic/enucleated syndrome and realized the Widow's civilization is a paradise without trying to actually be a paradise after his suicide attempts. Phase develops intimacy for Pixel, 6er's assistant, who's personality is a ticking time bomb, unaware as her race is dying around him. As Dibs interests eventually transfers, Phase realizes this, seeing Pixel in a lifeless state with his cured eyes. The plot of the story was Dibs awareness of the Widows that revive selective thoughtful antagonists and attempt to restore the antagonist's original mentality, baby sitting his early status. Dibs was stopping Phase from healing. Its brilliant. I just couldn't executed it properly for some reason. The hourglass speaks for its self.

      Also, I made all of my female characters less revealing. I apologize for that Haha I had to at first. You will only noticed the differences of my first two novels on FictionPress though.

      January 12, 2017 | Millennium Productions


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      I'm thinking of posting What If's, small events of my characters. What If is translated as Lore in No Awakening. I regret not posting a 1998 Chapter, which I have a What If event for. It will also allow me to add development to Marcus and possibly introduced an African American version of Kev, influenced by Late 90s Will Smite. Dragon Ball Z inspired No Sequence events and Dibs! Shadows of The Widow's Wrath, influenced by Paper Mario.

      They won't become continuous though.

      January 21, 2017 | Millennium Productions


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      F that. I can really praise the body of the opposite gender at times.

      Fixed.

      May 21, 2017 | Millennium Productions


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      Confessions time. Haha

      What I really appreciate about the series finale, are the Widows. I find my self thinking more about them when I think about this part of the series. Dibs is beautiful, what else can I say. The Widows are all around fascinating to me though. Its kind of hard to understand them. Like, what are they really doing? As I imagine my self inside their palace, I can honestly feel something isn't right as if their culture has already been stable for millenniums. Its.. concerning. Living in a black shiny palace based pyramid also sounds great. It makes you think once you realize Phase ultimately destroyed their culture, unawarely. The Ruins of The Thousand Year Door theme from Paper Mario The Thousand Year Door is another theme I associate with them.

      Dibs really had a creative talent.

      August 22, 2017 | Millennium Productions