Great Grocery Games!By: Johnathan Floyd
Status: In Progress
Created: September 10, 2015 | Updated: September 12, 2015
Genre : Humor
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
I like the premise, and definitely see novel potential; I must've spent half my morning trying to think up possible food weapons, such as the Craive, several opened hot-sauce bottles stuck on a frozen pizza via the plastic wrap and thrown as a discus, sending hot sauce swirling in all directions! Ahem. There were a few grammar issues here and there, and the odd mispelling, but nothing that wouldn't naturally get worked out through normal editing. Your story was a pleasant surprise for me, and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
September 13, 2015 Flag