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I'm just a Dreamer trying to make the universe a better place while I'm passing through. If you read my stories and feel even just a moment of relief from the pressures of the world, then I am truly glad.
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Rating:Very nice. Perfect length for a nice spook, especially with the approach of Spooktober. For some reason, I couldn't help but read this in CreepyMcPasta's voice.
Reviewed on: September 15, 2015
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Rating:I like the premise, and definitely see novel potential; I must've spent half my morning trying to think up possible food weapons, such as the Craive, several opened hot-sauce bottles stuck on a frozen pizza via the plastic wrap and thrown as a discus, sending hot sauce swirling in all directions! Ahem. There were a few grammar issues here and there, and the odd mispelling, but nothing that wouldn't naturally get worked out through normal editing. Your story was a pleasant surprise for me, and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Reviewed on: September 13, 2015