Status: Completed
Summary:
The old priests have fallen, the Demons are no more, but Kandrina has yet to find out what really killed her brother. Her need for revenge takes her and her former teacher on a perilous journey into uncharted territory. They must travel north, into the lands of the fearsome lizard men known as the Li Buqu. Meanwhile, the tribal lands are under attack from predators, not to mention the internal conflicts between the Vice-Chiefs which threaten to disrupt the People's way of life. Sample of the first chapter, comments and constructive criticisms are welcome
Created: March 3, 2015 | Updated: July 11, 2017
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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I've always felt that the most difficult thing about writing fantasy is that sometimes the whimsical wall separating fantasy from reality is too thick--a bit of an oxymoron I suppose. Your impeccable word selection cut through those barriers like butter, creating a vibrant and vivid world that felt as though it sucked me right into it. I may have just written a fantasy story, but your work is inspiring me to start another one soon!
May 19, 2015 | Ryan Funk
