The True Story Of EarthBy: Hogan Hetelekisis
What actually happened. Sort of an anti-bible explaining the truth behind god and what truly happened in many historic events.
Created: August 16, 2013 | Updated: September 4, 2013
Genre : Humor
Language : English
Reviews: 2 | Rating:
This story started out as slightly humorous and light but took a nose dive when Hogan Hetelekisis started to talk about some really dark points in history, like the Second World War. For a short story narrated through the eyes of the being that created humans it not only felt a little flat, but felt really contrived. This would have probably done better with sticking to lighter topics like the bit with the dinosaurs or putting in a lot more detail than just skimming over things like WWII, 9/11, etc.
August 27, 2013 Flag