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The True Story Of Earth

By: Hogan Hetelekisis

Status: Completed

Summary:

What actually happened. Sort of an anti-bible explaining the truth behind god and what truly happened in many historic events.

Created: August 16, 2013 | Updated: September 4, 2013

Genre : Humor

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

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1: The beginning and End 1427
Total Wordcount: 1427

Reviews (2)


  • D.M. Gergen

    This story started out as slightly humorous and light but took a nose dive when Hogan Hetelekisis started to talk about some really dark points in history, like the Second World War. For a short story narrated through the eyes of the being that created humans it not only felt a little flat, but felt really contrived. This would have probably done better with sticking to lighter topics like the bit with the dinosaurs or putting in a lot more detail than just skimming over things like WWII, 9/11, etc.

    Rating:
    August 27, 2013 Flag


  • Joshua Duvert

    Interesting Anti-Bible talk. I'm agnostic, but have nothing against religion (That's a lie) and found your story very entertaining.

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    August 23, 2013 Flag


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