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"Logic can bring you from A to B. Fantasy can bring you everywhere." - A. Einstein
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Interesting, you're using a picture of Swiss money. Does it take place in Switzerland or did you randomly choose this picture as a cover?
Cheers and greetings from Switzerland! ^.^
Commented on: July 18, 2016
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Dead Men Tell No Tales - Norrington's Return
Thanks! ^.^
It may need some time because I need to plan out the whole story. I'll try my best that it won't take too long. ;-)
Cheers!
Commented on: April 28, 2016
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Although I am not much of a were-wolf enthusiast, I enjoyed very much your story. Especially using good German names and a good description of Germany in its time. They are all accurate and correct. Good job!
The end was quite surprising as Heinrich got killed by (that sly dog) Karl-Heinz. Sorry for my language.
Good story and loved the details.Just a suggestion: You could add some more action in time when you know who the were-wolf is and what Heinrich is up to. Perhaps adding for example how Heinrich plans to revenge before letting it all out in the open, like trying to catch or shot him.
Cheers! ^.^
Commented on: April 26, 2015
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I enjoyed reading Le Nain Rouge, especially the detail you describe that awakens naturally reader's imagination.
A small writing mistake I've noticed while reading: When Antoine Cadillac defends Nain Rouge and his wife witnesses it. She calls out in French, it's the red dwarf! C'est le nain rouge, not Ce est le ... two vocals in that order sounds terrifying for the french speaking, so you "magnetise" them together.
Good writing, cheers ^.^
Commented on: April 18, 2015
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There is just one word I can say, WOW!!! (positively speechless) ;-)
Commented on: February 14, 2014