Status: Completed
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Created: March 27, 2015 | Updated: April 20, 2015
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
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I enjoyed reading Le Nain Rouge, especially the detail you describe that awakens naturally reader's imagination.
A small writing mistake I've noticed while reading: When Antoine Cadillac defends Nain Rouge and his wife witnesses it. She calls out in French, it's the red dwarf! C'est le nain rouge, not Ce est le ... two vocals in that order sounds terrifying for the french speaking, so you "magnetise" them together.
Good writing, cheers ^.^
April 18, 2015 | Fiona DayDreamer
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I enjoyed reading this quite a bit! I do watch a lot of alien documentaries, but I also watch a lot of monster documentaries as well, and this story definitely has that feel. It also gives a funny explanation of what happened to Detroit. Now it all makes sense!
May 10, 2015 | Alexandria Francetic