Sparkatale

thank you very much for your comment and I will keep it mind. Honestly, no English is not my first language but I am not sure it the apostrophe is a proof of that. I am a university student and I am told that in quation marks are more an american way. I used to use marks as Danish also uses this sign but because of university I have tried to train myself to use apostrophe. However, I will have the rest in mind. Once again, Thank you very much!

Thank you so much for your kind words! I was a bit in doubt about the beginning but now I feel better, thank you! 

This actually seem quite good, and I think that this can become very well! I like your interpretation of Lizzie, and I like the meeting with George! I hope you will continue because I think this can become quite good. Hoping for more soon :)

This is really sweet and lovely. It is powerful, and I really enjoyed reading this! :) Good job!