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  • Altifaer - (deleted)

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    I didn't know the site came back up! I was wondering what happened xD This is really really good! Aestra and Flodamir are interesting and Ionai is cold and horrible (in a good way!) I think you're changing a few things at atm but this is so good! Well done!

    Reviewed on: September 25, 2021

  • I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft

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    I just read the whole book and the way you handled all four characters at once was really well done! They all grow older and further away from Jacob but at the same time he's still there! I felt really bad for Noah with everything he went through, but that last chapter with Nora was perfect! I know you're fixing stuff but it was really really good!

    Reviewed on: August 18, 2019

  • Copies of Copies - Archived

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    This is really good, I've only just finished reading what you posted now but it's a story I got seriously invested in! I know you got editing to do but I really like the characters, I loved 'One-One' and you can see 'Ian' change throughout the book! Please finish this!

    Reviewed on: November 14, 2016

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  • My Body Belongs to the Ocean

    Wait where did this come from?! O_o This was HEAVY but the ending is so so sweet! Especially when Nixon called his wife a bitch but then stops himself... damn! Is this only going to be one chapter? It looks really good!

    Commented on: May 21, 2022

  • Altifaer - (deleted)

    Hi! Kinda forgot to write back sorry xD I really liked this one! There's so much going on and the battle with the therithian was great! Just when they thought they were finished another one shows up O_O I'll be a little quicker with the other chapters xD

    Commented on: October 27, 2021

  • Time And Again

    Hey! I've been reading this for a small bit but I really like it so far! I'll comment more soon when I have time but keep it up!

    Commented on: October 20, 2021

  • Altifaer - (deleted)

    Wow! There's so much going on here 0_o I really like Aestra, even as a small child she sees some sort of symbols in the air, like during the archery competition in Alashque. No idea what they are but they feel like they're going to guide her as she grows up maybe? The locations are well-written, and so are characters like Aestra's family and the Aqueskin?! They seem like a really cool idea! This set things up really well!

    Commented on: October 2, 2021

  • Perennial - Book 1: Change

    I like this! You write in a way that I can clearly see it in my head. I liked how Lucas and Alex are so close. So do Variants change just into animals or can they change into other things? You said that they all got wiped out after the war, but are there going to be many more?

    There's so much to ask with only one chapter up! It looks good please continue writing it!

    Commented on: August 2, 2019

  • I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft

    Oh my god, you wrote a really deep chapter here! You're really good at writing different things at once, mixing Nora's day with what happened with Jacob. They're all so worried for him! I thought he was gone at the end! T_T I really loved it, this is really good so far!

    Commented on: July 13, 2019

  • A Battle for a Beauty

    I saw someone comment on this so thought I'd look at it! It looks really cool! What did the beast take? I'll read this when I have time and tell you what I think!

    Commented on: June 14, 2019

  • I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft

    Wow... Noah's a mess.

    I was reading there, that phone call with Nora about Jacob, it sounded pretty serious. Noah looks like he's a guy down on his luck. The scene where Jacob admits the diagnosis felt really serious! Keep it up!

    Commented on: June 10, 2019

  • I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft

    Oh another character! Aayush seems interesting, especially when he counts to himself. Reminds me of Percy from your last book somehow!

    Poor Jacob! It looks like he had too much, but it looks like this is building up to something. I'm scared to ask! The way the friends talk is really well done, I can see this happening in real life. Other than some spelling mistakes I loved it!

    Commented on: May 9, 2019

  • I'll Just Leave The Pieces Here - Second Draft

    I love the way that Jacob was written! Especially with his dog! I wonder what the deal is with Nora and Gabriel, why is he calling her if they're over? It was really well-written, I hope Jacob's okay at the end of the chapter, though!

    Commented on: March 14, 2019

  • All The Butterflies That Dhaka Ever Had

    Oh wow this looks interesting! A good start to the story. There's no spelling or grammar mistakes or anything! Keep it up!

    Commented on: November 14, 2016

  • Copies of Copies - Archived

    Oh wow. You actually see somebody insulting Ian in a cafe? That's rough. This chapter was tough, especially with them losing one of their friends. It was really well-written, though. I like your writing style!

    Commented on: October 30, 2016

  • Copies of Copies - Archived

    This was pretty good! 

    Yeah, I agree with the other person who commented, maybe take away some of the "...", but the actual story is great!

    Commented on: October 4, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Wow...this is actually quite good! Especially the poem in the beginning!

    Commented on: September 19, 2016

  • Copies of Copies - Archived

    I like the chapter, but what's happening in the beginning?

    Commented on: September 18, 2016