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Altifaer - (deleted)

By: Deleted User

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Uneasy treaties and an ongoing threat plague the nation of Altifaer, a land shaped and formed by the Magthetic Sea. Coming of age, Aestra Ortenson-Voldir longs to join the ranks of the Ightskn, looking for adventure outside of Dharthvale's walls. Flodamir - a centaur from the V'estherian clans, prepares for his first annual pilgrimage to the mountain of Drekklin in honor of their goddess. When a foreign threat attacks them - with motivations of their own - they set in motion events that threaten to destroy them all, harking back to an ancient danger.

Created: September 11, 2020 | Updated: April 30, 2023

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

Comments: 3

Favorites: 2

Reads: 1630

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Reviews (2)

  • RAYAAN C96

    I am deeply invested in the world you have concocted and the blossoming dynamic between the 2 central characters. Aestra sounds like a very interesting protagonist and her attitude and idealism are very entertaining, especially in the context of the harshness of the world you have built around her.

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    October 23, 2021 Flag

  • Just Another Reader

    I didn't know the site came back up! I was wondering what happened xD This is really really good! Aestra and Flodamir are interesting and Ionai is cold and horrible (in a good way!) I think you're changing a few things at atm but this is so good! Well done!

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    September 25, 2021 Flag

Comments / Critiques

  • Reply

    Hi all!

    With Sparkatale back up and running again, I just wanted to see how many active users are here and if we can get some critiques and comments going! I'm working on Fjollamir at the moment, and if you're a fan of fantasy and want to give some honest critiques and comments my way, I can return the favor with any works of yours!

    Fjollamir is only going to be up until December, so anything between now and then would be welcome!

    Thanks! Happy reading and writing!

    July 28, 2021 | Deleted User

  • Reply

    Hi all! Today is the last day that Fjollamir will be public and will be taken down tonight. Just wanted to say thank you to those that commented and for the readers who clicked into the project 1000+ times! The feedback was constructive and amazing and I cannot thank you enough! Happy reading!

    November 1, 2021 | Deleted User

  • Reply

    Hello (again) ^^' 

    Fjollamir will be up for one more week, and after this weekend only the first three chapters will be available as it will soon be published. Just wanted to once again thank everyone who clicked onto this project, it really means a lot! 

    June 21, 2022 | Deleted User