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Mohannad ilkarbal@gmail.com



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  • Joined 07/12/14
  • Last login 09/24/20
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  • Tale of Knight and Vagabond

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    Hello , this is relly good i like it , the way you describe the characters in details is amazing i think i will be keeping up with your story and see how it progresses , good job and keep going , waiting for your next chapter

    Reviewed on: January 16, 2015

  • Playground

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    the beginning was so amazing i love your style so much , keep on writing dont stop because you got potential , it seems like a mystery story with a very good plot , alot of twists and turns hopefully , keep at it i like what i've just read

    Reviewed on: January 5, 2015

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  • Tears Of The Sky

    Hello man , thank you so much , if you have some free time on your hands can you please check my story TEARS OF THE SKY and tell me what do you think of the content ? not the punctuation , just the story and the plot so far ? id be thankful 

    Commented on: March 13, 2019

  • Wolf Dressed In Moonlight

    will , that was great , some spelling mustakes and alot of Cursing but the main plot is great , chase and rita seems like great characters but some things i didnt understand , when chase turned back into a wolf into the hotel , shouldnt he be without clothes cause they were torned off during the transformation ? i donno am just guessing , and why did that huge Black wolf die with just one claw swign ive expected more because u made him seem huge and powerful , and he was on Chase's back so maybe some struggle , i like the story its good i just wanted to point out those to make it a little better , ill definitely come back to check the rest if u continue writing it .

    Commented on: June 5, 2018

  • Tears Of The Sky

    Thank you so much for aying that my dear ^_^ , it really means alot hearing it from you 

    Commented on: June 11, 2015

  • Tears Of The Sky

    thank yo so much for the help ,i really appreciate it 

    Commented on: May 10, 2015

  • Tears Of The Sky

    Hello , thank you so much for commenting , i dont know what pronunciations you mean , can you be clearer please ?

    Commented on: May 9, 2015

  • What a world!

    I like the beginning , keep at it i wanna read more 

    Commented on: February 24, 2015

  • Shadeless

    Hello and thank you so much for taking the time to come and check my humble short story , this is my first time writing and i know it has some mistakes but am really trying to fix it as much as i can , thank you so much for your support and am going to do my best to work on those minor mistakes you pointed out .

    Looking forward to seeing your next replies when you read the rest of the chapters until then you take care 

    Peace 

    Commented on: February 16, 2015