Sparkatale

will , that was great , some spelling mustakes and alot of Cursing but the main plot is great , chase and rita seems like great characters but some things i didnt understand , when chase turned back into a wolf into the hotel , shouldnt he be without clothes cause they were torned off during the transformation ? i donno am just guessing , and why did that huge Black wolf die with just one claw swign ive expected more because u made him seem huge and powerful , and he was on Chase's back so maybe some struggle , i like the story its good i just wanted to point out those to make it a little better , ill definitely come back to check the rest if u continue writing it .