Sparkatale

Hello! I am new (maybe not so new) author on this site, and I would be honored if you could find time to read and critique my story. I'm aware of how busy (not busy) you might be, so please use your own pace if you choose to listen to my request. Thank you for your time. I'll try to read your stories myself if I have the chance and give my thoughts on them. You may also PM if you wish to just talk, but I'm mostly looking forward to your reading!

Drake Kanto | November 13, 2014

So... have you ever played the Legend of Zelda games?

If so, maybe you would like to take a look at the (very short) tale that i posted just now about that game, it's intense, fast paced, and short. I don't know if i want to write out an entire story with this character, i only want to do it if people like the Link that i portray. I think he's super bad ass though... So all in all, tell me what you think! It'll take no more than five minute to read it i'm sure.

Thanks!

Jack Thornton | November 21, 2014

And if you've never played Zelda, i don't recommend that story^^ to you, however it is still a fun read. Instead, i would suggest you try out Jeremiah: War of the Black Horse Masters. That tale is an epic adventure, and i have just published the first chapter. I really want to know what people think about it.

As a side note, the world and civilizations which reside in the land of Arlen were made up by my brother and I when we were youngsters, and i just recently decided to write a story in that world for old time's sake. But i also think it's turning out great, so check it out!

Jack Thornton | November 21, 2014

If you would PLEASE read my Callie Cameron-Country Chaos i'd really appreciate it!!! Thanks!

Keely Kelly | December 10, 2014

Ack, I'm so sorry! I completely forgot about your story when I was reading it before! :( Anyway, when I get home from work I'll read it right away :)

Genevieve Middleton | December 10, 2014