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I'm looking for constructive criticism on my story

The story is "Savage" a piece of a fantasy fiction that is currently 3 chapters in the making. I'm looking for anything and everything in a critique that comes to the readers mind; character interactions, world building, even stuff like grammar and names would be useful. Whatever comes to mind reading it. Willing to read and review others's works in exchange.

by Curse of the Ninth | Aug 3rd 2014, 21:52


  • Let's do a trade. I can do Savage if you can do my story Diamonds Are Nothing But Trouble :)

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    Lizzie Striker | August 4, 2014


  • You got it! I'll start reading it right away. Thank yuo!

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    Curse of the Ninth | August 4, 2014


  • I'd be happy to do a trade as well, with you reviewing my story Carriers. (-:

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    A . Nonymous | August 6, 2014


  • You got it! I'll get to it tonight in a couple hours.

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    Curse of the Ninth | August 6, 2014


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