Sparkatale

If you comment on my work I will comment on yours. Even if it is out of my spectrum of like. Although if it isn't my cup of tea you'll just get my opinion on your first chapter. My comment will be more than Wow this is good. Exp. Does it have impact? Is the flow good? Can the wording be improved. Although if it is really good with only one or a few chapters I may have a hard time coming up with something to say. But trust me that is a good thing!