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Light Up My Sky by diane sky Completed
He didn't know her name, or where she came from or what her life was like. He knew but two things about her – she held the sky captive in her eyes, and he loved her hopelessly, deeply, endlessly. "I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. (I think I made you up inside my head.)" -Sylvia Plath

Updated: March 16, 2016 | Published: December 10, 2015 | Reviews: 0


Smoke and Mirrors by diane sky Completed
It is a time of dragons scorching the sky line. In Thebbington Abbey, Ember Blackthorne earns her living as a thief. When she crosses paths with both a humble, kind jeweler's son and a wicked, irresistible pirate, she learns that the world often catches fire and legends often beat reality.

Updated: September 30, 2016 | Published: March 23, 2016 | Reviews: 1


Poison and Wine by diane sky Completed
It started on a 4th of July. It ended on a 4th of July. And in between the two of them, I allowed Paul to captivate me like a firework show. I recognized the poison on his lips and I still choked on it. And he sipped on the fire in my veins like a fine wine.

Updated: July 25, 2017 | Published: October 24, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Seven devils by diane sky In Progress
The world has reached the point beyond redemption. Again. From beneath the crust of the earth are awoken the seven deadly sins, coming to ensure humanity's perdition. A great war between sin and virtue. A civil war within a single man, meant to either doom or save his kin. And the greatest sin of all, crawling under his skin. Murder.

Updated: October 5, 2017 | Published: August 2, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Ill Omens by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Takes place in 1888 London, written in a form of diary entries. While Jack the Ripper terrorizes White Chapel , a series of strange events and omens interrupt the daily lives of several people.

Updated: July 3, 2019 | Published: December 6, 2016 | Reviews: 0


Collection of Short Horror Stories by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
A Collection of my short horror stories

Updated: October 13, 2019 | Published: January 19, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Black Rain by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
For as long as most remember the black rain has always fell. Born from the dark curse power the Black rain twists and corrupts endlessly. But one man still fights, the one who remembers the lost days of the sun.

Updated: July 31, 2020 | Published: June 19, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Rainy Morning by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
I wanted to try something new. The title might change. Depending on the reviews i might makes into a full lenght book.

Updated: November 29, 2017 | Published: November 29, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Adventure Party: the forest crypts campaign by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
My friend and i got into role playing games. i figured our game might make for an interesting story so i'm writing it down. Our party : a human monk, a mage, an elf fighter and an elf ranger. You can now see what the characters look like : https://www.deviantart.com/blackheartravensoul

Updated: July 6, 2020 | Published: August 12, 2018 | Reviews: 0


Ghost Raiders: The Ghost Hunting Road Trip by Blackheart Ravensoul Completed
A story about me, my friends , a road trip and some ghosts. Some events are real and happened to me or people i personally know and some are made up.

Updated: August 17, 2019 | Published: August 21, 2018 | Reviews: 0


Spiral Garden by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Adel was a normal girl living a normal life until one day there was a break in into her apartment and the world turned upside down. A doll-maker Pamela takes Adel into her care, but she is secretly a magus helping the police investigate paranormal cases. There has been a strange phenomenon going thought the city - normal people suddenly gain magical abilities. Supernatural, horror, violence, mature themes, trigger warnings.

Updated: May 4, 2020 | Published: January 13, 2019 | Reviews: 0


Gvera Cross Extras by Blackheart Ravensoul In Progress
Stories Explaining the world of Gvera Cross and it's history, magic and many other things.

Updated: July 8, 2020 | Published: February 17, 2019 | Reviews: 0


Brunswick by Marlett Pines In Progress
Katelyn Price figured she was in for a boring couple of weeks when her parents announced they would be going to Hawaii to investigate native species of algae. And, for the most part, she's right. But then she takes a tumble into a hidden cave and discovers something ... ethereal. Kate just wants to forget and mourn her favorite camera in peace, but the secrets follow her all the way back to sleepy little Brunswick Maine. It all starts with a fire.

Updated: June 10, 2017 | Published: June 10, 2017 | Reviews: 0


As the Hourglass empties by Marlett Pines Completed
It's hard growing up in the harsh lands of ancient Egypt. It's even harder if you're a thief.

Updated: July 3, 2017 | Published: July 3, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Into the Unknown by Marlett Pines Completed
Maya didn't always know she was a girl. A short story about self-discovery.

Updated: July 31, 2017 | Published: July 31, 2017 | Reviews: 0


All Monsters by Marlett Pines In Progress
Up until now, Cadence's biggest struggle has been with writing essays for her history class. But a mysterious man and an evil race of creatures called 'Shades' change all that. Now Cadence is caught up in a race against time to save her family- if they're even still alive. Adversaries meet her at every turn, and although the mysterious Lucas has pledged to help her, he may turn out to be the biggest obstacle of all.

Updated: September 24, 2017 | Published: September 20, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Accidental Relationship by Kris Essler Completed
An accidental embarrassing mistext ends up bringing the two most unlikely people closer than they ever imagined.

Updated: September 21, 2017 | Published: September 21, 2017 | Reviews: 0


Unbreakable Premonition by Kris Essler In Progress
(Fantasy/Romance/Drama/Action) A world where social class and the ability to use magic defines your future. A magical mishap bonds the two most unlikely people together. These two have to learn to deal with the contempt from each other and their peers. As well as dealing with the emotional, mental, and social issues they both bring to this unfortunate relationship. Watch as this bond changes the views of themselves as well as the views of others, forever changing the rules of society. Just a fair warning this story has a bit of cussing in it. This is the first story I have ever written. I know there are probably lots of errors that can be fixed. I am hoping you all will give this story a chance and tell me what you think. I only posted a bit of it at the moment to see what people think of it. If it does well and people want to read more I will post the rest. I worked hard on this story so again please give it a chance.

Updated: September 21, 2017 | Published: September 21, 2017 | Reviews: 0