Sparkatale

Wow, I never really expected that ending, I really thought he was just a old man. Well written and very interesting. I kinda feel bad for him though

I had the idea Francis was a ghost. I don't think anyone would just bust into an old man's home like that, haha. The description was great! I imagined the inside of the house and how it all turned to play. I'm amused Francis still acts human - or does he not know he's dead now? There are no errors I spotted. Great job!

Thanks for the comment! Heh, he hasn't realised he's dead yet, which is why he acts to humanish... :P

Well that was quite exhilarating! The foreshadow of calling Francis "it" was nicely done and it added great suspense to the story. :)

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad the suspense worked haha :)