Status: Completed
Summary:
I don't like being vulnerable, it allows small, insignificant fears to flourish an' grow. An' without you to hold me in strong arms an' whisper sweet, comfortin' nothin's to me, surely I would go insane, an' after a year o' being alone, maybe I have. Maybe I have succumbed to my fears o' the insignificant. One-shot. Monologue
Created: September 10, 2013 | Updated: September 10, 2013
Genre : General
Language : English
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I will admit that I don't know much about monologues, if they're suppose to follow a specific format or are free to do what they want, but there were a few structural things that at times made it hard to follow what was going on. The beginning and the end of this is good, but the middle is slightly confusing due to there being no background for the character. For being a short piece I think Hernandez did a decent job, but I finished reading this piece unsure of what I was suppose to take away from it as a reader.
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September 11, 2013 Flag
