Sparkatale

I'm not sure what you're going for in this story but it reminds me of a few different suicide notes I've seen from schizophrenics. The ruminating thoughts, the conversations that are one-sided and bizarre, even the dark, capitol letters here and there. So if you are trying to portray mental illness you have done a wonderful job.

That was somewhat the idea, yes. Thank you! I'm glad you think I did a good job!