Sparkatale

It's not very scary, but i like it all the same. I think you could make this into a cute childrens book.

Thanks! I might just do that. I've been wanting to team up with a friend of mine for some time...

Haha, what an ending! Did not expect that... But I can fully sympathize, especially on school-day mornings. Ahem, I found half the poem repetitive, but that's like a double edged sword I guess. It might be overdone, but the onomatopoeia is also endearing in some way. 

Also, should I be embarrassed to say admit I shivered somewhere while reading this? Hmm, maybe it's the depressing music I'm listening to... Or the winter chill in the air. Or this poem... Probably a combination of all three. Anyways, good job. 

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. O don't normally white poetry, so when I do, it's normally love poems and heartbreak this and that.