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The Porcelain Princess

By: Derek Jensen

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Dakk Tribal's adventures as a demon Slayer has introduced him to many strange people, but none are as exotic as the demoness Ashelia, a being who calls herself the Porcelain Princess.

Created: December 28, 2013 | Updated: December 28, 2013

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 2

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  • S S Desai

    Filled with interesting yet relatable characters and a plot that seems to be unique I think we have a winner with this story. I will certainly read more when you update.

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    With only the first two chapters done, I can't say too much. The premise is pretty good and the two main characters have potential. Some of the dialogue is kind of awkward though. It would be cool if you wrote more then I could have a better idea of what's going on.

    January 11, 2014 | Dave Robertson

  • Chapter: 2 Reply

    I really enjoyed reading your story. I particularly liked the characterization you used. I think the books/stories I have liked best are due to the characters, and your characters are great.

    January 12, 2014 | S S Desai