Status: Completed
Summary:
A story I wrote for a writing contest on Furry-paws.com.
Created: October 23, 2013 | Updated: October 23, 2013
Genre : General
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
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There should be a Warning label on stories this sad!!
Your story is well written and I don’t see anything you need to do to improve it.
(Besides a happy ending)
As good as this is I don’t like it. God, I hate sad stories!
November 17, 2013 | Heather O'toole /Davies