Status: Completed
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Created: October 19, 2013 | Updated: October 19, 2013
Genre : Romance
Language : English
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| Total Wordcount: | 526 |
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As always, Koizumi does a great job with creating an almost full-bodied world while giving readers just a small glimpse into a world and story. This like the other short stories on this site takes little more than 2-3 minutes to read yet somehow despite the brevity the reader can easily picture the scene and feel the emotions. I will say that the ending leaves you wanting more and obviously has many questions unanswered, but definitely worth reading along with Koizumi's other work.
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You're very good with creating a vibrant world in a very low word count. I would say that with this one more than the rest I want to know more about what's going on. It's very good.
October 19, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
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Only grammar mistake I found was the capitalized She after the woman's thoughts in the second paragraph.
October 19, 2013 | D.M. Gergen