Status: Completed
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Created: September 13, 2013 | Updated: October 10, 2013
Genre : General
Language : English
Reviews: 4 | Rating:
Favorites: 2
Reads: 864
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| 1: | 20 Sentences - Shattered | 378 |
| Total Wordcount: | 378 |
Reviews (4)
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This is my second five star review and this story truly deserves it. In such a short span not only Shirori Koizumi create a very vivid, ensnaring world, but the intrigue at the end, the beautiful writing that seems to fit the descriptions, and even the details that are left unknown makes this one of the best stories I have read on this site. I would definitely suggest this to be read by any looking for something of quality.
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October 9, 2013 Flag
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Wow, i have to say for a short story, this was indeed a good read, although i can't figure what the story really meant :(
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September 17, 2013 Flag
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Short, sweet and beautifully written. The words flowed naturally and the detail was perfect. Really enjoyed it. No errors in spelling or grammar.
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September 14, 2013 Flag
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Beautiful writing. An idea for you (take it or leave it), do more of these, each with a different person and then write something a little longer where it all comes together? This was very very good and if I had picked this up at a book store and read it I would keep turning pages until I bought it. I would be very interested to see what you could do with this.
October 9, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
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ooohhh artsy cx
Definitely had an abstract meaning to it. I can see it being interpreted in different ways
January 12, 2015 | discarded account
