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Created: May 19, 2015 | Updated: May 22, 2015
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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I can tell you must`ve gotten this out in a hurry, but it`s still a great story nonetheless. It seemed that the story`s big question was whether the kids were human, alien, or from some alternate dimension. It reminds me of older books I read, like War of the Worlds, although not that old-sounding, but both stories do take place in England! For me, the ending was kind of mysterious, and I`m not sure if it could be considered an unhappy ending (as in the writing term,) or maybe just what I like to call a mysterious or abrupt ending. I used this type of ending in my own stories, such as Shiver Star, which was mysterious, and The Sea Angel, which was a little abrupt. Quite a unique and interesting tale!
May 19, 2015 | Alexandria Francetic
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On Chapter 4 so far. Can't wait to find out the mystery of the two children.
May 21, 2015 | Cardiff 1984